Fantastic; ecstasy...

WOW! awesome .

T_T that was beautiful! *sniff* lol. very lovely, and so well writen. i enjoyed it very much.

~HIKARi

Ok, it official, you are on my fave list of stories and authors - WOW! This was awesome! Well written, totally believable based on what we know of these two characters. I loved that you had Booth confirm 'This is not about the baby"

LOVED IT!

Sigh. If only the season 4 finale did go like this. Absolutely lovely.

I just loved it!

Amy

Sigh, i loved it! I loved her confession about being in the store, and about being able to connect - and more than that, I loved that he reassured her. 3 It shows how much they care about and love one another.

I'm off to read more of your wonderful work!

xox

Omg. That's it! Now that's the way it should've happened! Right there just like you wrote it! I think of all the fanfic that I've ever read, none has shaken and touched me to the point that I felt I was right there in the room watching everything unfold and feeling it too. I don't mean that in a perverted way at all, it's just that this one little chapter said more... I've got tears streaming and that never never ever happens to me. It could not have been done or described anymore perfect than what you did here.

This part here...?

"it is this that is their first real kiss, this that is open and honest and real, conveying just how much he has held in the last four years. He is confessing so many things in this kiss, conveying a smattering of words with the way his hand cups her cheek, with the way he presses against her body, the way he moans - it all comes together to spell out something he’s been unable to say to her for all these years."

Wow. Freakin wow. I completely melted into a pile of goo.

From that part on I don't think I took a breath myself until end. My gosh, you nailed it!

so amazingly perfect. how i wish this was how it all played out, instead of a high school talent show and quantum leap back to the future jumps and the worst 3 words possible.

thanks so much for this. and please, give us all an update on your projects, dying to know what you've got cooking.

Such a sweet, realistic explanation as to why Bones suddenly decides to have a baby - with Booth.

When I read ff where she says "I love you," I think, *Bones would never say that.* But here I was so caught up in your story, that I was as shocked as Booth instead. You told it from Booth's hopelessly-in-love (without being a doormat) perspective stunningly.

One of my favorite lines ever, now, is the last sentence. It put such a lump in my throat. I'm so glad I found this. Thank you.

Wow. You made that ridiculous plotline work. Congratulations! I envy your imagination.

On another note, I'm glad you put that PSA about safe sex on your homepage, because I was wondering about the lack of condoms as I was reading your other fics (yey for a fictional world with no std's and no unwanted children!). If you're worried about it being too preachy, don't do this, but you might want to add that PSA to the top of all of your M-rated stories where the characters don't practice safe sex. Your smutty scenes are so passionate, they inspire others... it might be a good precaution to drive home an important message.

This is just beautiful and I wish to see it on screen, thank you very much.

Seriously, I think the characters here are pitch-perfect and you've woven a stunning scene between two people who love each other beyond reason.

this was lovely. really. i loved your old work, and can see such an improvement in the time that you've been writing original fiction. the...i'd call it quietness, others might call it subtlety, of this story was just right. it's hard to find the line between too little and too much, and in this piece you've found it.

you put words together in such a beautiful way -

'...her palm pressing against his throat. “Yes,” she whispers. “I see.”'

the most beautiful image/dialogue combination.

thank you. i loved it.

OH

MY

GOD

soo wonderful!

It is so nice to read a new story from you :)

If only the finale had gone down like this I might be happier fangirl today! LOL. This is such a beautiful story. You really got into their thoughts for this baby storyline - both of them. I loved the idea of Brennan realised that the closeness and peace she felt in her mothers arms was the same experience she shares when she is with Booth.

And I so want her to be the one to say I love you first.

Beautiful story, thanks so much for posting x