CONTINUE PLEASE

This is an awesome idea keep it up i look forward to more chapters in the future

Make the story a bit more morbid. I suggest reading some of the 007 books to get a feel of what James Bond truly is.

Fricken awesome

nice man

PLEASE UPDATE

In my previous review i said minimum 50 words in less than 3 pages, i meant 50 words

This story is a bit unbalanced, mainly in the crossover section.

Its not a fatal flaw, or a mortal wound to the concept, but the entire thing about bond is his battle against one "1" Evil genius at a time, in between small pockets of random detective work, a well placed and often foreseeable gunfights or fistfights with numerous henchmen and bad guys, the occasional seduction of specific women. And also, he never takes down the enemy in the first meeting, and doesn't use assassination methods that aren't obvious in most cases, thought this might be a quirk of character, like if hes challenging his enemy. Often he either tries to get close to the enemy to find out his plot, and sabotage it, or just to gather facts about him and often get caught doing so. Also, the main henchmen/hence-woman are always the second to last to die of the bad guys.

Plus, a 00- always make us of his surroundings and a set number of items acquired by the quartermaster, or Q, as a bond with superman powers would make it really weird, but if you put it like this, Naruto could use his 'talents' to replicate different items that bond has used in the movies, thought making water out of thin air is kind of 'black magic' in the bond universe, don't you think.

Bond never takes a job or mission that wouldn't count less than world crisis related incident, so my best thought was that you could put Naruto in the Bond world, instead of the Naruto world, and use one of the movies as base-plot, but with your own twist to the storyboard. Nothing to fancy, or it might spiral out of control. Or you use a Naruto, with knowledge about weaponry, data hacking(No computers in the naruto-verse, so its out of the question), CQC(Close-quarter-Combat, for all you Mgs fans out there), Uncannily ability to piece together even the most minute things together to the big picture(A few details plus or minus), and a steady stream of equipment and information(that always gets lost or destroyed), to not say the least the drinking and smoking habit(these are reduced when Pierce Brosnan took the stage, smoking that is, drinking went up)

There would pop up unbalanced ideas that conflict with the main proxy's of both story's originality that don't work together, but if you can think of a good way to solve any problem that pops up, it would live to die another day, wouldn't you say...

However, what i have stated before is just factors that u should take in account if you continue the story, they are guidelines, not directives, and you can take the story to hell and back, and all i would say is, go for it. Its your story, and thats the fact, nothing else.

So on the side of the story, it could have been a bit longer. A normal chapter length that captures more people is above 50 words in less than 3 pages, sometimes 2 if its a unusual story. Your spelling issues can be fixed, just like everything else, with practice. An increase in environmental description would really help your story to stand out better. With it you would increase the word count significantly, and also help to remove the constant spacing between lines. You can check out my any of my story's for guidelines, but its your call. Last but not least, you should add in more people in the story, not characters, but backdrop personnel, to make the worlds more... alive. I mean, the world isn't a A to B, and you always see more than just the main character and his co-members.

It gets a 6/10, because its so short, but if you update with longer and improved material, it could get to 7 or 8 depending on the material given...

minato namikaze and kushina uzumaki

those are his fathers and mothers names

i liked it very good but use some kind of line when author notes end or when the pov changes to somewhere else

im pretty sure also that hiruzen sarutobi isnt coward like that :D

you could also make better description about things.

other than that i liked it :D and i hope ppl will write james bond naruto fic too

it was good for the most part. the punctuation could use alittle work, but the storyline was superb. the inner monologue was entertaining, lol. Sarutobi sweating was something that was nice to see. I choose the cookie.

Interesting job on the story so far, please do your best to add more soon.

the grammar and spelling was very good. the storyline was original and attention-getting. it was realistic and Sarutobi's reaction at the end made me wonder just what he was up to that James would come after him for. I am going to guess that it had something to do with naruto's mother being a former lover or good friend of James Bond. keep up the good work!

i find this rather interesting please continue this _