what nice story! please write more!

LMAO! this story was awesome XD "yousuke... I want sex." lol this was so great, and i was kept laughing the whole way through the story :P i also liked how you showed a bit of Chie's perspective, a lot of authors would have just had her pop in then pop out. And i liked Souji being a total douche XD Keep up the good work! XD

A really great story although somehow I just can't imagine Souji saying something like "I don't care, Yosuke. I'm fucking you. Now," Well I guess in the end he's just a horny teenager XD Really sweet ending too :)

3 I liked it, it's so sweet

Pretty cute.

aw kawaii! loved it! 3

and laughed so much! :D

ahh i wish u made a few more chapters though, there aren't many souji/yosuke rated M fics here on , and ur story is so good! i think u should really consider writing some more chapters. at least consider it, please! i'd definitly read them! ;)

Loved every freaking second of it -glomps- Do you think you will do more of the SoujiXYosuke pairing; maybe them actually telling Dojima and Yosuke's parents? -puppy eyes-

LOLZ!

Oh, and for the problems about children...

ADOPT!

Or, for the girls, artificial insemination. Whatever it's called.

Jeez, Souji can be really evil sometimes. It's like a comic I found on Deviant art...

I love the conversation at the end

LOVE IT love it love it. That was so cute and hilarious. And not to mention hot! You are so good at writing the SxY pairing. And Souji as top on their first time! I don't know why, but I just think of him as a bottom. A bossy bottom, but a bottom nonetheless. It still worked. Chie being secretly hot for Yukiko was awesome too. It totally makes sense, and it gives everyone a partner (assuming Teddie and Rise get together!) I have to get chapter 12 of The Magician out now - it's half done. I have been inspired!

Amazing! This story made me smile so much! :3 They are just so cute! *snuggles Yosuke*

OMG. OMG. SEQUEL I WANT.

AND

THIS

ONE

WAS

YAY TOO. OHH SOUJI

Cute and funny, but honestly, I would have rated this M, to be safe. It cuts it pretty close. But I liked it! _

oh god this was brilliant! i loved it and you kept them all in character. you've got real talent! plz write another for me 'big heart eyes'

cya later!