pls continue! awww souji died and yosuke is just a wreck :(

I think I've seen a LJ/doujinshi similiar to this... On LJ is was ideas submitted by an anonymous users, so I can't tell if it was you, but either way I love the plot.

yosukee...i can feel your pain...

*sob* TAKE THAT U F**KING TABLE!

so..is souji really REALLY DEAD?

i can't believe it! u really bold to write this fic..

but..

I REALLY LOVE IT SO MUCH!

KEEP WRITING this please...! *puppy eyes*

This is brilliant so far! You've really nailed down Yosuke's emotional responses. Well done!

p.s." is there a smuttier version floating around? heeheehee ~_

You truly are evil for writing this! D:

Omg, after reading the first 2 chapters I thought it couldn't get any sadder. But then the glasses and .. damn

Amazingly well written!

I await the next chapter .. even 'tho I'm sure you'll make something terribly angsty of it XD

omg.

NOO.

OMG.

TT_TT

yes despite the email you give me im still going to read this.

because you did put a lot of effort in this (i believe so? O_O) and er well you're doinga wonderful job portraying the emotions.

youre an amazing writer.

and yosuke T.T i feel the pain.'

I HOPE YOU DON'T KILL THEM ALL OFF IN THE NEXT BATTLE THOUGH D:

TAKE THAT YOU STUPID TABLE! *snuggles Yosuke* I can't wait for more, as always! :3 Looking forward to more angst! *smirk*

Teehee, I love the dig at the hair-don't.

Poor Yosuke. Such amazing doesn't deserve to be sad.

I love you, seriously... *smirk* adding fluff to make it that much more angst-y! D: I cried... :3 It's this "Don't leave me" stuff... D: And Souji... he leaves... *tackles Yosuke in a tight hug* And... my god, the torture for Yosuke! DX

And... I actually thought about the 'who would be leader' thing after reading the first chapter... :3 I thought Naoto too... just like Yosuke. But I'm glad you have it as Yosuke... :3 He just seems so much stronger than everyone else right now... because he's willing to look at Souji's body and he can do it without breaking down completely.

Go Yosuke! Rescue Nanako! *cough* ... V.V

somehow. when i saw this in my e-mail i was like NO. WHY IS IT ONGOING. T.T because the fic is like a punch to the gut. that's what i feel right now. T.T oh angst, i can never learn to like it. _ your writing is amazing though. keep up the good work!

D: Oh no! Poor Souji! P-Poor Yosuke! *cry, cry* ;.;

T_T

that was extremely sad.

and gut-wrenching. lol. not sure if that makes sense. good job. T.T

Many hearts for you.

Or maybe you're a jerk at heart? Killing him off like that! How dare you!

Nah, it's good readin'.