I know that the author is no longer with us. I really enjoy this story. However, there is a giant problem with this chapter as well as the following chapter. The problem is this: How is it that Sarah and Casey's orders concerning the Intersect are in the intersect when they did not receive said orders until after the Intersect was already in Chuck's head?

What is the title for the sequel to this story?

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Great ending. I look forward to the sequel!

This was incredibly well put together and entertaining, thank you

AWESOME STORY!

i love the montey python reference from the parriot in their

Well put it this way, I absolutely loved it from start to three quarters through the last chapter. You'd built half the story up to that one moment on the beach, and then you sort of wasted the opportunity for a long talk between the two of them where'd they both make sure they're on the same page. I also think you should have wrote their first time sleeping together. And also after they had the big talk on the beach you should have had them kiss which could have led to them sleeping together.

That whole wanna get married thing seemed like such a waste of what could have been a great scene...

But it was still a thoroughly enjoyable story...

Nick

Oh WOW! that was WONDERFUL! I LOVED your story and I'm sad to see that you are going to be taking it down! I think this is the 1st Sarah/Chuck I've read and it was utter love!

THANKS:"D

Wow! You sure put them through the ringer. Are you really as you sounded in your comment at the beginning of Ch 23? Anyway, really great story, very much looking forward to a sequel, but you seem to already have a bunch of WIPs so I guess I will have a wait a while.

amazing yet angsty lol

oh, wow!

I really can't find the words to describe what a roller coaster ride of a story emotionally this one was for me. Well paced, and it matched the characters so well.

Just a very minor critique to aid with readability? Some type of break signifying a change in scene would be helpful. Not a chapter break but rather something like dashes or lines would be appreciated.

thanks again for a fantastic story!

wow! i don't even know where to begin on this review. ok, how about how awesome this story is! i am a huge chuck fan and have even started writing my own fanfic's but this one is the real deal. it has such a strong plot structure. i was a little scared going into the alternate ending to see how chuck and sarah got together. awesome job in creating a story that captivates the reader! now i go to read the other stories you have written! A

This story is fun because it is so unpredictable. I think you have captured the tone of the series really well too - light humor, forward-moving plot and the repressed undercurrent between Chuck and Sarah. When I saw how many reviews this story got, I couldn't wait to sink my teeth in...and I haven't been disappointed. Minor nitpick: Casey's dialog is a little wordy. He's a little more succinct. And every now and then the dialog is a little weird. But again, minor nitpick. I' can't wait to read more.

veery nice ending