Well, that was awesome NaruIno is my second fav pairing after NaruSaku and damn that was funny and kinky.

this was a very interesting should do more of them .

Good job, it's an awesome one-shot. Open to being continued, I like the way you wrote Ino. Overall 10/10.

that was good
Draco122

Yeah i'm ending up like Kakashi now, everywhere I go i read porn on my Iphone, this is one of my favs.

Will i liked this you need to make the next chapter pls lol.

Hmmm. My cousin told me to read this, but I guess I liked it. My DAMN cousin likes this stuff. She's 16 and I'm 18...

Your gonna continúe this , rigth ?

I thought that it was a really good story. I actually liked the ending.

I loved the fic you did any awesome job writing it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading any of your other fic also.

QuietForest

awsome job :)

ive read this a couple times and i cant believe i never reviewed it! i love the naruino pairing and your lemon is definiely good. id like to see some more one-shot naruino lemons from you D

Wow that was an awesome lemon good job.. makes me curious what happens now ;)

~HR~

Eleventh paragraph down

"It's about time, I was beginning to wonder if you had {left} without me" she rose to her feet and set a fire up so she could see a bit better.

missed the word left or whatever its supposed to be

Pretty good story but as you said at the end it did fall out just a bit.

Just a suggestion but at the end add something about...

{She smirked as she looked down at him.

"I guess you did"

He just grinned as she leaned forward for another kiss.}

It's better than just leaving off with him saying I proved you wrong.

Other tan that a very entertaining story.

Hope this helps. I like letting people know if they missed a word. Its good to be helpful. Don't you agree?

Naruto would probably be the only one who could go through that whole experience and say "Looks like I proved you wrong" at the end.