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Y'know, I can't say the idea of this pairing never crossed my mind. But now? I actually think it's...cute? Yeah, I guess you've turned me to the dark side. Go you!

Seriously, though, this is like a masterpiece. You catch them so perfectly. Ahhhh...I was wondering where all the good fanfiction had gone, other than a smattering here and there...and obviously, it's in the oots fandom. Yay!

your writing is really good and this is one of my favourite pairings but you shouldn't leave this at a oneshot. And the sequal shouldn't be a oneshot either... so on so on.

Oh this is brilliant! You've got the descriptions and Belkar's attitude really well. Pleased to see that there's more fics following this, off to read at least one now!

Big well done x

Ah, yes. THIS is what fanfiction is for. XD

An... interesting take on what happened. XD Hilarious! There IS something oddly fitting about a B/V pairing. XD

Most of the time, I'm a mixture of horrified and amused whenever someone talks about the possibility of Belkar & V romantically... but this time? I find this oddly captivating and dare I say it - cute?

I've been lurking around this site for some time, mostly looking for more OOTS fanfiction, but this one has finally prompted me to sign up and comment on one.

I just really like this one. Your description of them kissing and Belkar's feelings towards V are really well done and fitting. You know, most of the time I find reading fanfiction awkward because I don't think the author captures the personality of the characters and makes them say/think things they would believably say/think in canon, but I have no such problems with this. You really did an excellent job on this.

So, I have a request now :P. Would you write more along these lines? I would love to see more OOTS fanfic, and I'd love even more to see some more Belkar & V fanfic.

But either way, thanks for writing this excellent little story. I thoroughly enjoyed it! Great choice for a title too, very fitting.