Such a great story! Please update soon!

Wow what a great story at the edge of my seat couldn't but it down ... please update soon can't wait to read more more more and more

great job..keep up

OMG! You can not leave a story like this!

I've read the entire story so far and I love it. Please continue soon! :-)

I'm wondering if "Adam", dark haired, over six foot tall, could actually be of Gothamian origin...

aw, sooooo great, loved it, I just would like Clark doesnt have it so easily pls!

Whoa, hot and sensual and wonderful. I love reading the tension you create between these two characters. Excellent chapter!

I'm really loving this story! You really capture the emotion and pain that both Clark and Lois are experiencing. Great writing! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Not just one but TWO updates to this wonderful & intriguing story in as many days? Christmas came early this year! ;) Don't spoil us now...could definitely get used to these daily updates, lol! Seriously though, soooo happy you're back & I'm loving the direction you're going here. Glad you didn't leave us hanging at that little chapter 3 cliffhanger, I must say...at least Clark got to Lois. Now it's time for them to get together (in more ways than one) and solve all these mysteries! Thank you for sharing your story with us...I eagerly await the next update...

Please continue this story..

Hi there!
Personally, I, as Clois fan had wanted closure about Clark and Lana and Lois to be unfold, since day one, and from many stories that I've read, this story depict the trouble precisely. I like everything about this story! So I hope you'll updating soon! :D

Dont stop thier keep going im loving it so far

I really like it. Update soon.

I almost couldn't believe it, that you updating after quite sometimes!
its good that I'm keeps checking then..:)
more soon please..:D

keep it up