Awww I love Mag. I like how you incorporated the song. And what you said about her soul

This made me cry, and also I wanted to launch myself into their world and help her!

*Sigh* I found another Blind Mag person... Yay! Great oneshot, though it could use a little tweaking. Just a little. Your last few lines are a little strange. As is the word gorged. You might want to switch it gouged...

You caught every little detail about Mag perfectly. I always felt bad for her, and now I feel even worse.

I just have one little thing to point out-'She could only od so much' should be 'She could only do so much'. Be sure to watch out for fast typing errors, they can sneak up on anyone. ;)

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