Well dang this was very interesting sorry to see such a good read left untouched for so long. Hope one day it is taking back up or adopted. Thanks for what is here though.

oh...sweet...baby...jesus! This story is effin brilliant! Love,love, love this Jasper! I know this story hasn't been updated in 2 years but I just had to comment on the amazing plot and the character of Serena! I would love to see this story get finished!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS! It's so awesome, I can hardly stand to wait! I want to know where is Serena from? Why is she so dangerous? When did Jasper decide to become such a total and complete turn on? WHAT IS GOING ON? LOL. Please continue, it's too good to be left alone, unfinished. :)

I've been meaning to read this story for a while, and I'm glad I did. I really enjoyed this. Hopefully you'll update?

This sounds amazing! Usually people make Alice disappear or have them never date in the first place, but I like a little, reasonable, break up once in a while. I'm usually uncomfortable about first persons, but you really do have a great personality going with Jasper _and_ Serena. You must update more of this, I've never threaten anyone in a review, but I'll lock you in my closet and beat you and Calliope Jones to make more.

this story is addicting :)

im lovin this story. your makin him seem like such a bad ass... but i love how serena got under his skin in this chapter... she totally one this one. i cant wait til she finds out what he is... cuz then its REALLY gonna start up! please update soon! :)

oh, she really is getting to him. i am so loving this. I can't wait for her to figure out what he really is, and for her to have a reaction even better than bella's was. i don't doubt that she's actually going to figure it out at some point, and then i can only imagine how jazz is gonna react. and i really think someone's gonna show up that she really doesn't want around, and that's when jazz is gonna majorly come into play. oh i so can't wait. i hope you update sooner on this one. i really am loving this.

wow that was awesome. i like how you guys showed how they could get underneath each other's skin. i really liked this chapter. i like that you guys did some of the chpater from her pov then form his pov. can't wait for the next one!

dude,

so that was just awesome. (:

i love this story.

and im suuper sorry i dissappeared like that.

i thought summer would give me more time, not less, lol.

i have a babysitting job and babysit two or three times a week from 8 to 5, and i have a job at ritas (ice cream place) three times a week. UGHH! lol. atleast its money! ohh, then you add soccer four times a week.. and voila.. Kelly's life!

hahaha, well great job. im going to try and catch up with your other stories. (:

Thanks for updating my 2. favourite story ;)

You are so talented! Please update asap!

I love this story! Promise to update quickly, will ya?

Hi! Love your story. Jasper is gorgeous! PLEASE update this story! Can't wait.

Livia

kick his ASS serena! just for fun. and you know he would like it.

OH MY GODNEESS! THAT WAS SO FREAKING INTENSE. Every jasper character is so strong. damaged and held together by sheer force of will. i love it! serena. beautiful name by the way. she i really like. the other girls are good, believe you me, but serena..that girl packs a punch! i'm gonna read the next chapter right now! love love LOVE!