Rereading a bunch of your stories and found I had not left a review for this one. Messy eating vs messy from what happens after. Cute and funny. Thanks for sharing.

I also like the post Breaking Dawn stories. You can still make characters in canon, but you can take in different direction.
You are so great at writing humor. There must be a lot of laughter at your house.

It definitely made me smile.

Wow, really enjoyed this, it's nice to see them relaxed and having fun.

Funny and very cute.

great story, and I love the profile pic

I couldn't stop the smile on my face since I started reading this one-shot. Edward's a lot more sly here now that they're married and their worries are behind them. That last part was hilarious!

It is really funny! Especially the last part. Jasper and Emmet just sounded so innocent and that they know nothing about why Bella's clothes are all teared up, and the irony is that they had been teasing her for that the day before... :P

I loved it! It fit perfectly, like it was a part of the original story.

Ahahhaha I loved it! you're an awesome writer, and this story is original and entertaining. great job!

Love the last little scene!

Very good. Well written, eloquent, funny and in keeping with the characters natures. 5 stars

Lol.. The end part was funny...

i really enjoued this one! it was funny!

A great story. Very well written.