Excellent story! I loved the end with Ronin! Thank you so much!

It's all in the perspective...

Poor John whumped again. I love your imagination, thanks for sharing.

Poor John! Of course He was the one to ingest the black parasitic worms! Your description of his pain made my own stomach roil! Great story!

Wonderfully revolting. Thank you!

I worked in a hospital over the summer as an intern, and had this happened in our ER, there would have been ten or so docs nurses and paramedics crammed into the room watching with rapt facination. Great Shepwhump!

Urgh, that was horrible - in a good way. The wormy things creeped me out *shudders*. Great little story though, very well written

Disgustingly fabulous! Your style is really entertaining and the characters were spot on.

Great whumpy story; but oh my goodness, poor Sheppy having those disgusting parasites in his stomach...*shudders* I liked that he was freaked out enough not to argue with Carson about staying in the infirmary.

This story was absolutely disgusting...and I absolutely loved it! It was disturbing and gross and made me want to hack my own guts up a few times, but I loved the charactor interaction between John, Carson, and Ronon. John wanting to call Ronon for help because of the gun, Carson wanting to run hide under his desk when the thing came out of Sheppard's mouth, it was all good. Great story, gross story, but great!

Great story! Creepy! LOL

Ooh, creepy. But very well done!

That was...Awesome! Perfectly disgusting. Thank you for giving my creepy nightmears fodder.

Wonderful "Eww" effect. Great Shep whump factor and good medical stuff.

ew, that was disgusting. great story though. ;)