Reviews for May I Use You? |
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EMIYA14 chapter 5 . 7/6 For the third one I never understood how gohan was barely growing in power tho its possible that his body is just tired of the constant zenkai boosting and him barely giving himself time to properly recover? Plus unlike goku I'm sure just like vegeta he thinks he already reached the pinnacle of the saiyan race? |
Guest chapter 21 . 3/28 I felt sorry for 17.. how he was abusive towards 18 also made me sick, such a shame he couldn’t be saved. |
shuyuejia130414 chapter 21 . 1/22/2019 This ending was good enough and damn how i hate the main story for having so much potential being ignored we been introduced to a strong female fighter as ally, Toriyama decided to shoved and degenerated her role as that damn baldy lover, it would be much better if she end up with Gohan and then having a female saiyan kid since the series really lack of female fighter. |
shuyuejia130414 chapter 16 . 1/22/2019 I think you forgot that seventeen should blew gohan body to oblivion so should be no body remain anymore. |
Tenjo chapter 21 . 10/3/2018 Not the greatest of endings (as in I would have preferred a different outcome), but it tied up all the loose ends at least. Great story. |
Tenjo chapter 16 . 10/3/2018 His assumption that Gohan was alive isn’t a stretch, it’s actually weirder that he didn’t get even consider the possibility when all of his friends ignored him. The only problem with his mindset is that he can apparently read Eighteens mind to the point that he can tell when she is being only slightly truthful. |
Tenjo chapter 13 . 10/3/2018 Honestly I was only reading this to see how rape would play out in a story, to see if it would be realistically disgusting or just played off as something small and laughable- but this story is pretty deep. I was reading your other Gohan x Eighteen story but this one is thousands of times better. |
twisterblake2015 chapter 3 . 9/24/2018 nice |
Kingz RKA chapter 21 . 8/16/2018 Easily one of the best stories on the fan fiction site. Keep going with the creativity fam. |
Kingz RKA chapter 14 . 8/15/2018 Roshi is one smart OG. |
Kingz RKA chapter 9 . 8/15/2018 You give more detail in the chances of ki control through your fan fiction stories then dragon Ball super did with goku's retarded stamina increase & decrease moments lol. Keep going this sh*t has me on the edge of my seat ... |
Kingz RKA chapter 6 . 8/15/2018 When babadi died so fast in the story i laughed so hard . He got roasted to smithereens man ooooo sh*t! That finish buster tore him apart! Random yes but a good edition to the tale. Keep the good work going . |
Kingz RKA chapter 5 . 8/15/2018 This is a good read for sure loving the different out looks & prospectives of the characters. Keep going with the good work. |
Guest chapter 17 . 5/2/2018 The correct term of whats happening to gohan is power blockage As he explainned gohan had to much power that his body cant handle it so its storing away out of his use just like teen gohan he has all that power and cant use it beacuse it would tear his body apart and the only way is to bring it out is rage like future gohan did when he whent im guessing acended saiyan he was so angry his power just bursted out of him just like when teen gohan when super saiyan 2 he used his rage to get stronger and broke his power blockage but of course its back now * cough cough golden freiza saga |
Blake2020 chapter 2 . 1/30/2018 sweet |