poor stein and crona.i wish medusa hadnt messed with were so fragile to begin story.

I like this a *lot*. I love how you covered characters who are usually overlooked, and I love how each of their thoughts both revealed the character that everyone sees and the character that is hidden. Very good.

I love how you spent as much time on the minor characters as on the major ones in this. 15 is particularly good.

This small facts are ramdom, but canon in all the right ways. You continue to write good fanfiction, Orchid Falls. This piece is... wonderful. Awesome fic.

-curledruler

Candid.

These are all so simple and tragic-well, they're not all tragic, but the ones that are sad are heart-rending despite being so short, which is really powerful. I mean, IX is just two sentences, and it's one of the most powerful of all of them! w
If I may draw particular attention to XIX (because I'm a Stein junkie), it is really apparent how trapped in his own head he is when compared to all the rest of the little "facts"-while everyone else is thinking their relationships with other people, he's chasing the memory of Medusa... who *is* another person, I suppose, but... it still feels very closed in. I love it.

Wow... this is just...amazing. You made it sound amusing and spirit-lifting, yet serious and emotional all at once. Its a simple beautiful peice - and I love the way you included every character. I hate it when people leave out those smaller characters, but you managed to sneak them in. I think my favorite is Justin's. Great work! :]

these were wonderful! i especially liked the one of black star secretly thinking maka would be a good rival. nicely done!

cute, all the comments made about life at Shibusen were all accurate and very deep! Loved this! ;)

I love this. I really do. It's so awesome!

I think this one is my favorite line(s?) in the entire story-thing:

'VI – Marie never stopped loving Stein. She thinks she would be quite happy not marrying him even, so long as they got to stay side by side, her hand warm in his. She would have to choose the décor for their house though; there are only so many times she can drink out of a beaker and not wonder if she’s being slowly poisoned from the inside out.'

Cause I'm a huge fangirl for the SteinMarie pairing. XD

I also liked XIX too. YAY STEIN!

It was well written and I enjoyed it immensely! Good job!

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Perfect, just perfect. These are all so wonderful, from the funny ones (I can't stop laughing at Kid and Kilik's secrets), to the sad ones, to the frightening ones (my God, Stein), to the sweet ones (and Shinigami's secret is the sweetest of all). All of these are amazing. And thank you so, so much for giving a bit of the spotlight to Sid, Nygus, and the secondary Shibusen team. I absolutely adore Sid's secret, by the way!

i like it... very cool!