Reviews for Commando
PhinalPhantasy chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Ouch! *holds self protectively* I don't care which brother it is, that's gotta hurt!
Twinchy chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
The poor, poor boy! And yeah, I'd agree about it being Sammy between the timelines in 'Mystery Spot'. Your description fit the bill to a T in my humble opinion.
Onyx Moonbeam chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
I like that even the moments which would be funny when shared with Dean and just pain filled without him.
LivingForTv chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
Hm, was biting my lip until I came to the end. So sad. And funny:-)
1983Sarah chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
First off...someone goes commando? :D Second off, that sounds like it hurt like hell! Poor Dean/Sam!
Vampyvii chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
This is good - Poor Sam probably had lots of bad days during those months on "Mystery Spot" - Nice work!
Miyo86 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Wow! This made me sigh,giggle, and wince, all in only 100 words! That is a nice, and yet painful image...Sam in no boxers...*cough* You naughty thing . *giggles even more*
Mad Server chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I totally thought this was S4 Dean, and then I read you'd intended it as "Mystery Spot" Sam and that made so much sense too.

I like the coagulated, half-formed scabs.
sweetysmart0505 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Aw, poor boy, which ever one it is. I see it as Sam too for some reason, just not that scene! Odd. Good job on this!
PlatinumRoseLady chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Ouch.

This is painful.

Poor darlin.'
DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Oh big big big ouchie! Growl! DBB x
KatyMM chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Ouch!

Definitely not a good day for this Winchester! (I couldnt decide which one it was - you're right, it works both ways.)
Impaladreams chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Ha you got me, I was expecting another sort of commando! lol

I think your Mystery Spot timing with Sam fits this perfectly - it's always so much worse when they're on their own. Dark and desolate with plenty of 'ouch', very nice use of the word!
Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
very vivid! i loved it. we were playing pictionary the other day and i got 'commando.' do you know how hard that is to draw? So your title made me laugh and then that was what it was really about! very cool.