That's so sweet

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Help I have no clue what to say!
Seriously. Hush mouth here.
Carlisle is so sweet with words. They love each other already:)
Btw, why did Carlisle reveal his real age? I mean I can see why he'd want to with Esme since he loves/ trusts her and doesn't want to seem ten years older than her but what if she mentioned his age to someone else? Wouldn't they question how a 23 year old man had been already working there for 2-4 years?
Whatevs. Love this story.
- BlueCrystals23

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! Good story!

Carlisle is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!

Hi again, I really like how you ended the story, with "goodnight my angel," connecting Carlisle and Esme with Edward and Bella. That was sigh, very romantic, and perfect. I said before that I thought you needed to address a few vampire issues, which would add another layer of depth to the story, but other than that, I really liked it(I also meant to review the chapter on their private wedding in their own home, that was so beautiful!) Thank you for writing a Carlisle and Esme story, very few people do, and since I think Carlisle is even more attractive than Edward as a character, its a real gem when I find a new one. You should consider writing a human story between Carlisle and Esme...Now they are RARE, especially the good ones, and there is so much possibility there for plot with Esme's history of abuse and her running away etc., just a thought. Thanks again, I hope my last review didn't sound too harsh, I just thought I should point out the need to deepen the story by your addressing some of the vampire issues with Esme that would have come up.

Amy R.

Hi, I really like your story so far. You seem to be well written grammatically, and the romance between Carlisle and Esme is very sweet. I can't help but feel though,that you have glossed over some of the key issues of Esme learning to live life as a vampire. She seems to master going out in public with incredible ease, there is no mention of her red newborn eyes in public, you don't talk about the learned human mannerisms that everyone talks about in Twilight, and when Carlisle is supposed to be only 23 and Esme tells everyone at the Christmas Ball that she has known him since she was 16, and that he was a doctor then and set her leg...no one questions this being odd, since he is supposed to be a junior doctor. I also can't see Carlisle and Edward being "okay" with Esme breaking the rules to go outside just because she felt like it was a nice day, possibly endangering the family. Carlisle is very much about family duty that way...duty first, then pleasure. Also, Esme never seems to talk about her son, or have any awkward transition into being a vampire. I like your story a lot, its one of the better Carlisle and Esme stories that I have read, but it lacks a bit of depth, which I think you could go back and add.

Sincerely,

Amy R.

loved it

loved it

awwwwwww so sweet

i bet their going to the island

awwwwwwwwwwwww

awwwwwww so sweet

awwwww always a gentlemen loved it

aww they moving

awwwwwwwww