Oriana, I understand why you couldnt finished this story, I am sorry for your broke up with Jason and I hope that in this time 2019 almost ten years after that you are happy and succesful.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ

Hi! Just read you story and I understand why you stopped. I’m really sorry about you and Jason as well. Just wondering what would have happened with Bella and Edward?

why

wtf I only read completed stories because I hate when authors do this, why don't you but the status as on hiatus so you don't do this to others or just take it down completely

This was a great story and I'm soo sorry about you and Jason even if it was a long time ago. But I really think that you should take this story down or at least not mark it as complete. I usually skip to the last chapter before I read a story to make sure nobody died, and I saw it was on permanent hiatus but I read it anyway. I know some people don't do that though so they may jump to conclusions. You are a really great writer though. Loved it.

Oh PLEASE COME FINISH THIS STORY PRETTY PLEASE! I’m so sad!

Well, I am - and I'm sure majority of other readers are - very disappionted in where this went. Not because of the unfortunate happenings that took place in your life, but because of the manner in which you dealt with it. I apologise if I sound harsh.

This story was genuinely interesting and although I loathe emotionless sex in fanfictions, I stuck around for this hoping that perhaps the story wouldn't end up being so impossibly shallow. I was partially correct. The story contains unbelievably emotional descriptions with an astounding handle on it's characterisation. For this, I stayed. However, I find it odd, to say the least, that even after Edward discovered his love for Bella they still felt the overwhelming urge to have insanely wild sex; it seems as though it wasn't really true love but perhaps more of an infatuation. But that's just how I felt about it as it honestly killed the immersion.

Truthfully, the biggest disappointment in this story was the lack of forewarning to the fact that the story was incomplete. It wastes a lot of time and emotion when you invest yourself in a story and leave utterly unfulfilled. The least you should've done was not marked it as complete. There was absolutely no conclusive ending, therefore is was not complete.

You know those stories/books that just truly make you remember why you love reading? THIS IS ONE OF THOSE!

I have a suggestion for you in case you still check postings for your story. You should not have marked this complete when it was/is not. It's not that big a thing in the scheme of life to invest time in a story and find it's not finished, but it is a disappointment. I always check status before I read anything and this was completely misleading.. Again, not a major deal, just a common courtesy by an author.

I will miss this story but I understand. Also, OH MY GOD THE BREAKUP IS SO SAD HE MUST NOT HAVE SEEN HOW AWESOME YOU ARE AND YOU ARE AMAZING SO TALENTED!

Fuck...

Perfect

WISH I GET SOMEONE LIKE HIM IN THE NEAR FUTURE HAHA

I have no idea if you two still read these reviews, but a boyfriend/girlfriend team writing a fanfic? Completely awesome. So yes, this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Keep up the amazing work!

I know I'm 8 years late, but I still hoped you got better