Reviews for That Look
Besen chapter 27 . 9h
THAT IS GUTSY RIGHT THERE! Nice going!
Besen chapter 20 . 10h
This chapter was perfect. You not only had the guts for a bad outcome with the wave mission, due to Naruto missing out on it, but you also decided to not have Team 7 enter the Chuunin Exams. That takes guts, because 98 % of fanfiction author do not have the courage to build around this kind of changed events; they change the premise, but not canon.
Great work. I look forward to how you built around these decisions.
Besen chapter 12 . 12h
Fillilng a shot glass with a fire hose! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Zenobien chapter 24 . 7/20
Shikamaru is a savage
eyefoes chapter 42 . 6/30
Hooooooly shit.
eyefoes chapter 36 . 6/30
Oh my god. Yes, lmao! This is fucking funny.
eyefoes chapter 33 . 6/30
Ooh? What's going on now, what is Itachi talking about? How exciting! I'm very bad at picking up on stuff so excuse me if the answer is right there lmao.
eyefoes chapter 30 . 6/29
This is so exciting!
eyefoes chapter 20 . 6/29
OH BOY. Plot twist! How will the chūnin exams go from here?
James chapter 69 . 6/19
Dang I think I just read the entire story again I only meant to read a chapter or 2.
Guest chapter 69 . 5/15
You are being inconsistent with Naruto's power levels, what happened to his automatic defence?

He simply doesn't come across as a kage level ninja.
Guest chapter 68 . 5/15
This sucks, just doing a 180 from one chapter to the next.
You managed to make me utterly dislike Anko, it's not something that can then be fixed with a few heartfelt words.

The only proper version of this chapter is one where Naruto end up spurning Anko, showing her that it's too late, her past coming back to bite her in the ass.

And then have Naruto move on, embracing the snakes fully, maybe learning a snake version of the Sage Arts.
Guest chapter 66 . 5/15
It goes completely against Naruto's character at this point to even consider getting a dress like that.
Guest chapter 64 . 5/15
Anko overmanned Naruto way too easily, even if he was exhausted.

Anko is in no place to offer ultimatums, I hope Naruto will be using Manda again, and plenty of times.

If Anko can then take out Naruto, I call BS. She isn't a kage level Shinobi, and Naruto supposedly is now. It would be inconsistent writing, not staying true to the power levels established.
Guest chapter 62 . 5/15
"see through the every of all snakes"

Mistakes like this one is why you need a proofreader.
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