this is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon

I was looking for a female!Lloyd story when I found this, but this is good, too.

I despise first person, too, but I think you handled it rather well.

Huh, this is interesting. I've seen some similar things, but not a gender-switch and an insertion at the same time. I'm actually getting interested now, and if you keep updating and toss a few plot twists in along the way ('cause following the same ol' story is bo-ring!), it'll turn out great.

-Aion

more plz

Yay, Kratty-pants is here! XD

Awesome chapter! Update sooner. :(

...The only thing I don't really like that they're too... in-character. I mean... their genders is supposed to be switched, right? So... Lloyd sould have a feminime side or somethin'...

Nice idea

Cant wait for the next chapter!

Will Colle be as clumsy as Colette? Will be funny!

This caught my curiousity. I have a few questions though...

Did Lloyd and the others already finish their journey? If not, they can't help Sera and Colle out, huh? They'll have to rely on Sera's knowledge of the game to avoid any mistakes.

Second: Are you just going to make Sera and Colle repeat the Lloyd's and Colette's lines from the game's script? It won't be fun if you did. Let Sera and Colle say whatever they want instead of listening to Lloyd and Collete. It'll be more original and interesting if you do. We will know what they are going to say next if you leave it alone, and that's not really fun.

Other than that, I like this story. Oh, and I want to see Sera's picture! If you don't mind, that is...

Looking forward to next chappie! Ciao!

Yay, new chapters ftw!

Haha, go Xena! :D

I though Lloyd is a manly name? I don't think it fitted to be a girl...

Oh yeah, first review!

Awesome story so far, I want to know what's going to happen. : /

Update! Update I say!