Reviews for Out of Action
SexiiFoxii chapter 20 . 7/3/2016
I love it! I expecially love how you added quotes from famous people. Also how you shown the love of a brother, father and friends; general family love. I always had a soft spot for Donny even though I love the other as well and I love how you have betrayed him in this fanfic. So basically I love this story.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/25/2013
Love this story just as much the second time I read it. :)
Sarachan chapter 3 . 7/21/2013
I love the way you show Raphael's loyalty and compassion towards Don in the last scene when he is at Don's bedside. I love this story of yours, this has to be my third time reading it, it was also the first TMNT fanfic I ever read. So thanks for getting me into reading TMNT fanfiction. It's been a great experience.
madagascarmaster chapter 20 . 1/1/2013
*claps* Bravo! Love the quotes you stuck in there, brilliant work!
madagascarmaster chapter 17 . 1/1/2013
Okay, this chapter made me fall out of my chair laughing!
Lady of Myth and Legends chapter 20 . 10/4/2011
Wow! Amazing! My father's a Docter, MD really, and I feel the same as Don. Its something I like too, being able to patch your sister up. I dont have any brothers, but my sister. She can get herself into so serious trouble. Don's my fave anyway! You protraded him well in this story. I loved it.
nim draug chapter 20 . 9/18/2011
this was brilliant! I loved it - Loved all the quotes too :)
BubblyShell22 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Wow. Awesome start so far. I really like it and how Don talks about events after the movie. Nicely done.

The Bubbly One,

Shell
read4hsm chapter 20 . 2/4/2011
Excellent story! I'm so happy that the others see Donny the way I see him: awesomness! I do wish there was that last fight with Karai, where she would have seen Donny and known how her empire was shut down. Your ending of mystery seemed appropriate for your story. Great job. :)
Silverdragonstar chapter 20 . 7/11/2010
I came across this story after it had been completed so this is to review the whole story. Very good I enjoyed it immensely. The characters were much like the original comic (Eastman and Laird) comics. And the story it's self keeps you wanting to see what happens next. Thank you
Lina03 chapter 20 . 5/18/2010
Way to go Donnie! Anyway, thank you for sharing this wonderful fic and I hope your muse inspires to write some more Donnie goodness! _
LadyBlue001 chapter 20 . 5/15/2010
Sweet! I'm so sad that this story's finished now... T-T Maybe there's a sequel in the works...? XD

Keep on writing!

~Lady Blue
Toraus chapter 20 . 5/13/2010
Awesome story and good ending! -
Mikell chapter 20 . 5/13/2010
Nice ending *claps* I love the brotherly fluff in the follow up, and that Mikey learns some of the medical stuff. It's good someone else int he family is at least competent on the finer points of their physiology.

Hope things are well on your end of the wires, and that you're writing again soon. :)

Rejoicing in the day,

-Mary
MelodyWinters chapter 19 . 3/14/2010
Oh... I am really enjoying this story! Great job!
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