Okay. I love this version. It's got great potential and I'm intrigued to know what happens next. I really hope you continue to write this. I'd hate to see it go waste.

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I read the original, and while I love the revised version is it possible for you to send out a copy of the original? I honestly want to reread it and I didn't realize you stopped updating this one :(

update?

aren't u gonna post more chapters? :(

I'm loving this story so far!

hope your mom is feeling better.

please update son:)

Seems almost like mind control even thought its not

Poor Bella. Everything is just kind of messed up for her right now. She'll figure it out eventually. The Cullen's better watch out. What were they so upset with Daniel for? Or was it Bella for saying yes? I don't know why but I had déjà vu during this whole chapter. It was weird. I know I haven't read it yet but for whatever reason it felt like I had. I still enjoyed it though.

love it

Awesome

AH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, LIKE TOMORROW SOON! And eww, dissection. And when she stepped on the heart... *vomit*

LOVE THIS CHAPTER.

OMG this just became my favorite story :D

love it

Sympathies RE Mumsie. And can I say, I am nearly CERTAIN I've read this before - right down to Edward's attack in the lab... Are you re-writing this or something? #confused