Reviews for Beginnings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() More chapter please |
![]() ![]() no! it was getting good too. Please please PLEASE continue until this stories end |
![]() ![]() ![]() QnQ nuuuuuuuuu! |
![]() ![]() love it favorite |
![]() ![]() ok wait so is like mpreg normal in this story? |
![]() ![]() Wait. Pauze, rewind, and play. Somethin don't add up here. As I recall, Shuichi said he NEVUR had sex b4. But Hiro said he would b at home an hour after havin sex. So... Who'z lyin here? |
![]() ![]() Hold on. Somethin' in ch2 doesn't add up 2 me. Now if I recall, Shuichi said he NEVUR had sex b4. But Hiro said Shuichi would b at home an hour after doin it. So who iz lyin? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the song! Cute! |
![]() ![]() Nice story. Please tell me where I can find continuation. I really like this story. |
![]() ![]() what? but your story is the best i have read, two male pregnancy between Hiroshi and Shuichi and their respective partner... where can i get your continuation of the story? please write it, i'm already a big fan of yours for the continuation of this story.. TT_TT |
![]() ![]() T.T NO! ur story was good T.T |
![]() ![]() I refuse to update any of my stories on here because it goes against the FIRST AMENDMENT, freedom of speech. I have the right to say what I want, when i want and how i want. it is a violation of my civil liberties for me to just accept what someone tells me i can or cannot say. I will not allow ANYONE to dictate my art ... GIVE ME FREEDOM OR GIVE ME DEATH! - Mimi |
![]() ![]() please finish the story because it good even if it have to be censor story. It good |
![]() ![]() ![]() No don't deleat don't do that I live this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a cute fan fic |