Reviews for Beginnings
lucien.francine chapter 7 . 7/5/2016
More chapter please
kim chapter 7 . 4/18/2015
no! it was getting good too. Please please PLEASE continue until this stories end
Erikkun chapter 7 . 3/30/2015
QnQ nuuuuuuuuu!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/4/2015
love it favorite
Guest chapter 7 . 10/12/2014
ok wait so is like mpreg normal in this story?
MStarr123 chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
Wait. Pauze, rewind, and play. Somethin don't add up here. As I recall, Shuichi said he NEVUR had sex b4. But Hiro said he would b at home an hour after havin sex. So... Who'z lyin here?
MStarr123 chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
Hold on. Somethin' in ch2 doesn't add up 2 me. Now if I recall, Shuichi said he NEVUR had sex b4. But Hiro said Shuichi would b at home an hour after doin it. So who iz lyin?
shelby98 chapter 6 . 3/6/2013
Love the song! Cute!
Alex chapter 7 . 2/6/2013
Nice story. Please tell me where I can find continuation. I really like this story.
haruka kanata chapter 7 . 1/14/2013
what? but your story is the best i have read, two male pregnancy between Hiroshi and Shuichi and their respective partner... where can i get your continuation of the story? please write it, i'm already a big fan of yours for the continuation of this story.. TT_TT
Guest chapter 7 . 10/2/2012
T.T NO! ur story was good T.T
Guest chapter 7 . 6/28/2012
I refuse to update any of my stories on here because it goes against the FIRST AMENDMENT, freedom of speech. I have the right to say what I want, when i want and how i want. it is a violation of my civil liberties for me to just accept what someone tells me i can or cannot say. I will not allow ANYONE to dictate my art ... GIVE ME FREEDOM OR GIVE ME DEATH! - Mimi
Guest chapter 7 . 6/28/2012
please finish the story because it good even if it have to be censor story. It good
lugwiglover14 chapter 7 . 6/21/2012
No don't deleat don't do that I live this story!
WinterValentine chapter 6 . 5/21/2011
This was a cute fan fic
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