Reviews for Broken Twilight |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i luv ur gypsy stories ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really amazing story, I am keen to continue reading the rest of your Broken Twilight related stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First one without a doubt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I pick the one with Sasusaku and bits of Nejiten mainly because it has nejiten. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As I read this, I wonder if you've ever heard April Wine's 'Sign of the Gypsy Queen': From the album Nature Of The Beast Lightning smokes on the hillrise Brought the man with the warning light Shouting loud ;you had better fly; While the darkness can help you hide Trouble's comin' without control No one's stayin' that's got a hope Hurricane at the very least In the words of the gypsy queen Sign of the gypsy queen Pack your things and leave Word of a woman who knows Take all your gold and you go Get my saddle and tie it on Western wind who is fast and strong Jump on back, he's good and long We'll resist till we reach the dawn Running seems like the best offense Staying just don't make any sense No one could ever stop it now Show the cards of the gypsy town Sign of the gypsy queen Pack your things and leave Word of a woman who knows Take all your gold and you go Shadows movin' without a sound From the hold of the sleepless town Evil seems to be everywhere Heed the spirit that brought despair Trouble's comin' without control No one's stayin' that's got a hope Hurricane at the very least In the words of the gypsy queen Sign of the gypsy queen Pack your things and leave Word of a woman who knows Take all your gold and you go Sign of the gypsy queen Pack your things and leave Word of a woman who knows Take all your gold and you go Sign of the gypsy queen Pack your things and leave Word of a woman who knows Take all your gold and you go |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Glad that you're going to make a sequel, but I don't know which one is better. Both seem so interesting. I really like Shattered Dawn, but I kind of like Scissored Eclipse more. It seems more interesting and maybe there's a good ending since I'm guessing Sakura and Sasuke don't get a happy ending since Shattered Dawn's before Broken Twilight. But enough of my talking, I really don't care which one, I'll just read whatever wins anyways. D |
![]() ![]() ![]() waa~! can't decide! my conscience tells me "Scissored Eclipse" but i just can't decide... can't wait for more updates! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I.. I can't choose. D: They both seem SO APEALING! ...I have a thing for stories with sasuke as a prince in them. But the whole... Sakura becoming an evil (or not really so) gypsy girl that won't mind killing a couple of people... Sort of foreshadows that they won't have a happy ending... D: So... I'm sticking with the second option. :D (at least there's the chance they might get a... HAPPY ENDING!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() sequel,sequel, sequel, sequel, sequel, sequel, sequel, sequel! YAY! lol plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh come on don't leave us hanging Please PLease PLEase PLEAse PLEASe PLEASE Do a sequel Hope that's enough persuasion from me haha XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I couldn't stop reading! Oh please, please, please write a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do a sequel! DO A SEQUEL! |
![]() ![]() pls pls write a sequel. i luv this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice fic. It was good. I loved the plot. Liked how you ended the story. There's some suspense if there's gonna be a sequel or not. You should totally make one. I'd love to read about it. Since the villains are really awesome. And I just love Tenten! |