| Reviews for Goku's Past |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 7/5/2014 next chapter please |
 LeoxKarai4ever chapter 4 . 8/6/2012 Plz update i love tis story and i wanna find out wat happens XD |
| stich chapter 4 . 8/9/2011 so far so good keep it up when will next chapter be updated |
| NANA100 chapter 4 . 7/2/2010 Awsome i like this story |
| Gokufan92 chapter 4 . 2/7/2010 UPDATE UPDATE pwees |
| J.W. Appel chapter 3 . 1/7/2010 A good story but chapters are too short. |
| DeathBright chapter 1 . 5/25/2009 You have a good idea going, but you would do better if you had a Beta reader. |
| J.W. Appel chapter 2 . 5/24/2009 Awesome interpitation of Goku's mom! She's so much better than the wimpy,prissy versions of Goku's mother you often read about. Update soon! |
| J.W. Appel chapter 1 . 4/30/2009 Please continue! |
| ProjectSynapse chapter 1 . 4/30/2009 It's an interesting concept - one that I'd like to see further played out. One thing you might improve on is separating your paragraphs when different characters are speaking. Also, perhaps you could consider getting a beta-reader for your spelling and grammar. Other than that, I liked where this story is going. I hope to see more from you on this one soon. :) |
