Reviews for Cuter |
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LucaBlightIsPUCA chapter 1 . 3/31/2011 Sorry for reviewing this late. Well... I'm just into straight pairings of DN *got shot* :D Anyway, this is a really short BUT sweet fic :) KEEP WRITING! |
inuyasha116 chapter 1 . 9/20/2009 know what would be funny matt playing at the arcade with a group of people watching him defeat everybody. misa sees it and asks how to play matt laughs explains the basic way to do it misa wants to try he luaghs harder saying she can try but she will never win against him cause he is better than anyone plus he says she will probably end up embarrising her. misa gets mad plays and wins. everyone is in shock then laughs at mat.t he either keeps following her wondering how she won, acusses her of cheating, or trys to get her to play again. misa refuses to play, tells him to leave her alone, keeps on winning. matt keep stalking her mad/jelous trips and fall on misa. and etc |
SweetClown chapter 1 . 7/8/2009 it really got cute! D indeed Matt is cuter than Light...a LOT cuter than him... |
xxkaylakittyxo chapter 1 . 5/15/2009 That's what I always think! If Misa ever saw Matt she'd think he's cuter than Light! Oh how I wish for them to be together! :[ |
Hiei-and-shino chapter 1 . 5/6/2009 Oh Lord, what a cute fanfic! :3 I'm late with this review, but hey! Better late than never x3 Well, I don't know very much what to say 'cause I'm bored and I'm pretty worried 'bout Cookie's fic, but I really liked. Really, really, really liked. Well, I have to say that the phrase "Her smile was super pretty." sounded weird for me. I think that "Her smile was oh so pretty" or "Her smile was the prettiest" or even "Her smile was pretty cute" sounds a lot better. But that's just my opinion, alright? My favorite part was: "(Why you wanted, Matt? It’s not your problem. And you have to watch her, not talk to her)" Gosh, I love when you write like this. It's simply amazing. I think that's enough :3 Kisses for you, my beloved Pink :* |
Anne Asakura chapter 1 . 5/4/2009 Ah, eu to com preguiça de mandar review em inglês, mas você entende, né? 8D Eu demorei pra ler, porque eu fiquei com preguiça também. Eu tinha lido só o comecinho e, como eu te disse, achei muito divertida a sua idéia. Você precisa aprender a ser menos insegura (olha quem está falando) e aprender que já é boa o suficiente pra andar com os próprios pés u_u Tirando o fato de que eu sou e serei - apesar de ausente - sua beta pra sempre, você é ótima no que faz 8D Eu gostei bastante do tema que você usou pra abordar, porque o sorriso da Misa e os peitos dela são as poucas coisas que realmente valem a pena. Enfim. Eu fiquei com um pouco de dó do Matt, mas achei legal mesmo assim, amor. E..eu ia falar algo. Ah, é, mas não tem haver com a review LOL Não ouse a me xingar no msn quando eu estou off, ok. Eu tava desesperadamente tentando terminar a fic que eu ainda não acabei, mas eu prometo que apareço no fim de semana e jogamos. Sério. É que não deu pra entrar no domingo, porque a minha mãe me obrigou a ir numa festa ajudar ela. E olha que legal, ninguém vai entender o que eu escrevi, porque eles não falam português 8D Enfim. Desculpe não ter aparecido nos últimos dias, mas se quiser falar algo comigo antes de acabar a semana, manda um reply ou um email que eu vou te responder assim que puder. Te amo, darling. |
Montagh chapter 1 . 5/3/2009 Loved it 8D In the begin I thought, wtf misa has to do with matt, but then I remembered the whole observation stuff and blablablah Tá, em português agora XD Sério, eu gostei muito mesmo. Essa coisa do sorriso da Misa e tal, e realmente eles formam um casal legal... Bem legal 8D Adorei a fic, beijos 8D |
Threshie chapter 1 . 5/1/2009 Aw! X3 Matty's a "pretty cute guy, dressed funny"-hehehe, that's a really good description of him! The English is actually really good, especially since it's not your native language. I like how you wrote that Misa looked super pretty to Matt, but that there was something wrong with her. I love how the story starts out, too! I also like their silent conversation; hehehe, they COULD have said the things aloud, but they didn't need to because the other already knew what they were thinking. :heart: I really enjoyed reading this, great job! If you had an OP challenge going for Matt or Misa, I would suggest you post this as the MattxMisa work. :D Thank you for writing this, just from looking at my picture! X3 ~Threshie |
Hollis chapter 1 . 5/1/2009 Lol, Misas Right , Matt is 10 times cuter than Light x3. This was a really adorable one-shot! I'm sure the person you wrote it for would love it. I do really wish there were more MattxMisa fanfics...:( |