Please continue! The story line has a great deal of promise!

absolotley love it will there be loads more plezse thanks xdxdxd

This story is great. It's an interesting twist on things. I take it there are no vampires. That's cool, Edward will be amazing no matter what.

I love that you made Emmett her brother! I am so jealous, I want him to be my brother!

It sucks that Edward had to get sick, but like I said before, it's an interesting twist on things.

Keep writing, this is great.

Qucik question: Would you be willing to read and review my story? It'd be great if you could...

Thanks anyway. Can't wait to read more! D

No! I want MORE! Pretty pwease?