Reviews for The Entity |
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happy go lucky chick chapter 5 . 1/19/2011 omg i love this! thx so much for finally updating :D and this chapter was really well written, i havent read this in wut, years? and once i saw that you updated i remembered all of it lol, i hope we get more action in the next one and i hope this motivates you to keep writing cuz i really LOVE your story, omg i hope u continue! oh and sorry for not logging in, lazy me. |
TheSuperBanana chapter 5 . 1/3/2011 Holy Sweet Bejebus, you updated! And here I thought you'd left the sight or something. Well, I'm glad you're back! And good chapter too, I can't wait for some Axel and Roxas interaction. I'm looking forward to more updates, on this fic and the other ones too! |
review person chapter 3 . 5/30/2010 yay Axel is comming to my house ! xD |
Happy-go-lucky-chick chapter 3 . 5/23/2010 T-T waaa! i just wanna strap you down, grab a chainsaw, and force you to make more chapters! / |
meloncholyXharuhi chapter 3 . 11/23/2009 next chapter! next chapter! *drools* |
AmarantineOct.3'11 chapter 4 . 11/12/2009 This... is some weird sadistic shit you got goin' on here. But its interesting to see this side of Axel. |
sonicbaby11 chapter 4 . 11/1/2009 wow your good at this, and yes i agree stories with death,murder,swearing, and drugs are more interesting. Please keep doing wut your doing this story ROCKS! |
sonicbaby11 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009 now thats an opening X3 hm reminds me of how annoying my parents are lol |
A Romantic Inclination chapter 4 . 8/15/2009 Awesome. :3 Haha Larxene is a stalker~ I should have guessed after Re:COM. XD Haha that horror movie sounds like Saw. XDD |
TheSuperBanana chapter 4 . 8/14/2009 yay, you updated! i have to ask, is this going to be akuroku? because if it is that would be awesome! |
aradian nights chapter 4 . 8/14/2009 _ Yay! New chappie! Ha ha, Update soonish please! |
A Romantic Inclination chapter 3 . 7/6/2009 Wow. I mean wow. This is the Kingdom Hearts equivalent to Dexter. Which was awesome. :D Please Update~ :D |
yuffieownage chapter 3 . 5/15/2009 I don't want axel coming to my . Anyways. More blood seems to enter the situation, and axel seems to have killed vexen once again. one word. AWESOME! okay i'm done. |
aradian nights chapter 3 . 5/10/2009 Ha ha. This is the second time Axel has killed Vexen! I wonder which one would hurt more? I have to say, Having Axel throw A Chakram into your body then incinerating you from the inside out, seems excruciatingly painful... Oh Axel is just SO sadistic! I think I spelled a couple words wrong there... Oh well. Oh, I just wanted to ask one thing? If this eventually has a pairing, will it be AkuRoku? I don't usually like Yaoi, but this story is too good. I'd read it even if It was eventually Yaoi. |
Emerald Moonrose chapter 3 . 5/10/2009 Oh. Em. Gee. Kickass killing scene. I loved how you used an actual method to get rid of the body. It was perfect (imagine that underlined). I keep feeling like he forgot something, but I'm not sure what... Either way, this was awesome, and definitely a good ending to a bad day. Great chappy! |