You are such a brilliant writer ! I was actually visualizing all these moments while reading them. They are brilliant.

Really cute story! I liked it! However, what confused me was the sudden change of scenes. It would've been helpful if there was a page break in between scenes, or was it supposed to be that way?

Aww, cute. Well done!

Kamai6

so, so, soo wonderful. really

I wasn’t jealous anymore. It would be silly to be jealous of something that you have.

*sigh*

aww, cute :D

that was very good and well written :)

great job

This story has got to be one of my top favorites! You did such an amazing job writing it! You must write another one like this with Lily and James! :)

I did really like it, because it was such a variety of scenes and what they were about. I liked the last couple where Lily was comforting James over his parents' deaths, because a lot of fanfics just show the guys upset, not crying. I think this showed that everyone is human and has emotions.

Maybe I'm just insane. Point is, it was well written and creative, and I'm glad that inspiration kicked in and made you write this :D.

Well, it was cute in the beginning. You set a cute and romantic mood. Then it was a roller coaster from there. Some of your punctuation was off, like, you capitalize some words that don't need to be capitalized, like Love.

Also, the excessive ? and ? was getting a little annoying.

Otherwise, nice idea; I just wish you'd stretched it out a bit more.

Oh, that was wonderful. It was nearly exactly how I had always imagined their seventh year.

Absolutely loved it. It was amazingly well written.

I loved it. Its great!

This story is brilliant, it's so romantic, I don't think I stopped smiling the whole way through!