This is a brilliant story. It's so well written and moving.
If you ever get the chance to write the sequel I would love to read it.

Eu acho sua fic incrível. Sério.
Muito bem escrita.
Mas tenho que te confessar que fico frustrada em ver que a Rose não era nada importante para Edward, Esme e Carlisle.
Rose passou pelo mesmo trauma que Bella. Talvez até pior, já que seu agressor era o homem que ela amava e confiava. E que ela morreu.
Não vejo a mesma empatia desses três por ela.
É egoísmo meu? Pode ser. Mas não deixa de ser frustrante isso.
Jasper e Alice tem a desculpa de não terem vivido isso com ela.
Mas as coisas acontecem aqui como se nada tivesse acontecido com a Rose.
Ao começar a ler essa fic eu pensei: finalmente uma fic onde Rose teria a sua vez. Onde ela seria importante. Jasper está sendo. Porque não a Rose também?
Espero que isso ainda aconteça...

Great story.

Well, there isn't any story called Damaged on your profile, so I guess that you never posted it.

It's ok, I understand. I mean, writting something like that has to be hard, and I understand why you wouldn't finish it.

Anyway, this story was beautifull, don't listen to those who say otherwise, they simply don't understand. I don't understand how some people would think that Bella heal too slowly. I mean, if anything, she's healing too quickly! I can't even graps how someone could feel and be destroyed after something like that.

It never happen to me but I've been reading both true stories, stories inspired by real facts, originals stories written by survivors, and stories written by people who studied this domain for years and I can't even think about how strong you have to be to heal after something like that.

The only thing that make me upset about this story, is that we don't have many scenes between Edwerd and Bella. I mean, I understand why, but I'm a romantic at heart, and I'm a little sad that I didn't get my couple in this story...

I hope you're well,

Clem2605!

Wonderfully written AU. Painful but hopeful. Love Jasper, Emmet, Rose and the other Cullens. You've captured their personalities. I do hope your RL has moved in a positive direction and that you will, one day, continue this story. Thank you for writing.

This story is really good. I couldn't stop reading it and wanting more. I really like the changes you made from the original story. And Congrats on the baby! I hope you find a new place soon.

Wonderful! U just wrote like Stephanie! Could be better if u would have added the rape scene!

Where have you gone? When will you post the sequel? It's been years.

Big steps.

Awww

WOW, this is rough. I didn't see that coming.

Awwww. ... "wipes away tears"

I have to say, i am a little worried.

This is going to be interesting to see how she does with every one while awake.

Oh man, is this a turning point for BellA?