oh my goodness, THANK YOU! You're the only one who's written an Amaru fic, and it's really sweet! I'd write one myself, but I don't think i'd do her justice. thank you for writing this!

Very cute. A great Naruto X Amaru story. I also thought it was interesting how you kind of made it modern, not-ninja type world, giving everyone actual jobs, which were pretty clever considering everyone's character and story, and how you used each character, epsecially how you made Naruto and Sasuke old friends again :). And I like your style and how you got the mechanics right. Nice job :)

this was good you should make some more naruto x amaru storys

Ha! Awesome Story! You were the First one to do an Amaru/Naruto story in this website (I was the second). I can't believe that JIraiya's series was passed down from him to Naruto, hene making Naruto an author. I like ninja Naruto and I guess I like Athor Naruto too. Ha. Good Story.

Write More (if this isn't a oneshot). Or just write more Naruto/Amaru stories. Poop.

-Speedy ]

Good story...funny too...I'm sort of jealous...as the first person to write a NarutoxHaruna I planned on doing this too...oh well I call Toki, Guren, and all the other girls like Fuen, Fuka, etc, etc...anyway hopefully you haven't decided to do any of those girls...oh and also could you tell me what you think of my NarutoxNibi one-shot?

I enjoyed reading this fic. I had just recently saw the naruto shippuden movie 2: bonds erlier today and thought that amaru and naruto make a good couple. Shame that this is the only AmaxNaru at the moment. looking forward to more of you stuff. :-]

Really well done, I enjoy how you had did the scenes, I think it would be a bit better if you gave us a look at how much time passed between each part. I did, say what the hell, when I read Shizune Uchiha, nice surprise though, overall I loved it, awesome work.

Even though I prefer M rated fanfics at least some one finally wrote an amaru x naruto fic and a good one at that. Hopefully you'll write a few more.

There definitely needs to be more.

Good job.

That wasn't all that bad. There are a few concerns about continuity, and there should probably be a few line breaks to seperate each scene and that will fix it, but other than that, it's perfect.

I liked the small scenes in each little area that helped bring the ultimate scene to a front and finished it off at the end. It's good to see an Amaru/Naruto story out here on the site and I hope this story encourages more of the couple.

DASM

P.S.: Shizune Uchiha, when I first saw that I was like "wait, what?" so a nice twist there. I can sorta see it as well, but it was a side pairing anyways so it didn't matter all that much.

Who's amaru the story itself is good though

Heh, awesome story!

this story is awesome!

interesting... running into a bus. That is AWESOME. I am so mean. I wanted to read a Naruto/Amaru fic for a while. Shows at the end that another person has fallen for his charm. I have to admit I was expecting a princess but a future doctor works too. XD

Nice Story! I am impressed. I hadn't seen any Amaru stories til this one. Keep up your good work. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.