Please update a new chapter! I am looking forward
to read it! U are an amazing author!

Plz update I doubt you've had food poisoning for 7 years

Were do I start?

Well,the storyline is good, despite some grammar errors. PLEASE UPDATE. ITS BEEN 7 FREAKING YEARS!

I think you should have Misty push Dawn while they are near a cliff and accidentally pushes to hard and Dawn falls off and starts to drown in the ocean/lake/river and Ash has to save her while Misty is horrified by almost killing Dawn and Ash is really angry at Misty but after Dawn wakes up and Misty visits her ( with Ash to make sure Dawn is safe) and they have a chat. Dawn, being the kind sweet girl she is apologizes to Misty for upsetting her which shocks Ash and Misty and Misty says what are you talking about I'm the one who pushed you and tried to break you and Ash up. Dawn says if she didn't come with Ash, maybe Ash and Misty would still be friends, and maybe she should just leave. Misty and Ash are saying no way and that's not true and eventually Dawn and Misty become friends and Misty finds this guy (an OC) and all.

You should update this story. I know its been a while since 2009 but it has great potential. Honestly, it's the best fan fiction I have read! (Despite a few grammar errors)

hope you get better soon. I really want to see how this ends

nice hope u fell better even though this is 2013 i really liked it

Dude when's the next chapter going to b

Please update, I really love this story and I see that you haven't updated since 2009 I'm not sure if your even still alive or you forgot about it.

What happened? Did you die or fall into a coma or get a concussion? The last this was updated was at 2009! You said every Sunday! Man, just stop procrastinating and update. P.S writing this review at chapter 1 cuz' I can.

Whaaat?! Come on! I really want to read this!

Hope u recover soon and do not laze off with anoter excuse... GREAT STORY BTW

Please write more by tomarrow

Make may come in the story PLZ

Cartoon Calvin what is ur story called?