That was pretty good. I like it! Didn't notice any grammar mistakes, so extra kudos to you. Keep it up dude!

interesting combo :)

i love both characters so it was nice to see a story about them together! good job :)

Just to let you know you are one of my favorite writers in

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I just adore them together, good job on the fic!

Keep up the good work :D

interesting pairing, like what you did though

everybody thinks that Ulquiorra should go with Orihime

but i think that he and Rukia make a better couple

Im making a UlquiRuki story right now (but because i just got started, I have to wait 2 days, those sons of a...)anyway thats not important, its called GREEN EYES WHITE SKIN, look it up when i get it posted

Loved it. I'm head over heels for Ulquiorria and have even dressed as Rukia for a convention - you made my dreams come true with this fan fiction.

Thanks!

what a great story...i really like it. it would be better if it was longer...a sequel perhaps? a long one..

This is was a very good story!

Would they meet again? Will they fall in Love? and what happens if Rukia gets pregnant? o.o

~Juuri

its good

Wow, you go and surprise me again! I always wondered if someone would have Ulqui in his final form meet up with Rukia in Hueco Mundo somehow. XD Good work! It was short, and a definite PWP, but I liked it.

Also I couldn't help but notice how many stories you wrote in such a short time! Jeez, you're quite an author! I dunno how ya do it.

this makes me wonder... in his release form, did Ulquiorra wear a pant or is he stark naked? "