I LOVE IT! AMAZING JOB

Stunning a beautiful story that was enjoyable to follow

The best and most hilarious fic I have read to this date.

funny and warm

This was beautiful ...great...ecstatic ...I wish there was a prpbably you wrote about everything the story needed and it was awesome
I especially like it because this is the first fanfic that I read that didn't made jasper have scars..or pity himself. It made him laid back..fun...confident I really like this take on jazz. Alice was all but the same but at the same time different. She isnt as bubbly..or perky like other fics I read...non the less I loved it all

That was amazing. I loved the way you changed Jazz's character to be more human and fun. I loved the drama you put in and the little details. I especially loved the ending and the baseball cards thang. You're an amazing author and should continue with fanfic.
PS. Emmett, a minister? Good grief!

Please could you write more, I dunno... Maybe you could do the honeymoon or like flash forward two year later or something? Please? Because this story is awsome

I absolutely love this story and have read it like a billion times!
At the end of this chapter- when Jazz is still sitting in his car, I think Alice should have called his mobile and invited him up, I think that would have been fun. Great job and I live this story!

Beautifully done! I read this so quickly because it was fantastic and I couldn't put it down! Love this, well done
Keep writing and reviewing.

This was so sweet and I loved how clean it is.

I just want to say that this is one of the cutest stories i've read on this website. Really good job. :)

That was one of the most adorable things ever. It was absolutely great, fantastic, and wonderful. I giggled over the story and I absolutely adored the first chapter!

aww a little late but aww the most adorable thing ever! :)
i wish it was like this in real life :(

fun :)

This is either Nora Roberts or Debbie macomber because have read this before