I think that you like many other authors out there tend to over estimate Lily Potter and under estimate James Potter.

Great story. They finally got rid of old Voldybut.

Too bad about the slash, it would be cute if Sev and Rem ended up together :P

Good story.
Thanks for writing.

Lovely chapter. I didn't understand that last part of the author note. But that's on me.
Rock on

I like it
Has definite promise
Rock on

*Sigh*

You decided to remove Harry's greatest accomplishment. Defeating the basalisk. :(

WTF is it with you Holy Water? NONE of the religions are important, or have any power in the world of Harry Potter. None whatsoever.

It's impossible to "blend" Muggle technology with magic. What, did you think Lily was the only Muggleborn?

You create Wizarding versions of Muggle things, but anything that actually requires electricity is a big no-no.

How the bloody Fuck could Argus Filch, a SQUIB, know about the soul fragment and get it out of Harry!? WTF did I just read lol

I'm perfectly okay with Sev and Lily being brother/sister friends. I'm really liking this so far.
Rock on

ah damn... it's going going to be another canon hugger. well.. I suppose the story started off good. Your writing style is nice.

My constructive feedback for future stories is:
- Deviate from canon. It's a fanfic not a rewrite with minor adjustments
- Try keep paragraphs to a max. of 3-4 sentences each. more makes text hard to read for dyslexics
- Apply logic to calculate the aftermath and actions of people there after.

The more people deviate from the original plot in a fanfic the better the fanfic ends up becoming. thus far I've been severely disappointed with the HP fanfics as they never strayed from hogwards or the major events.

I look forward to, hopefully this being a fanfic that will change the major events and introduce new Ideas. There are only so many ways the troll, quirillmort, ginnymort, triwizard championships and the like can happen. So I hope your fanfic will at least ditch 2/3rds of the main plots to avoid it being like any other.

Personally I very much doubt that the Malfoys are Christians.
It seems to me that because of their magic, wizards act like little tin gods.

Most faiths I know about would teach wizards to respect others more than they do.
Obliviate to me is an unforgivable spell. You are your thoughts and memories!
To rape someone's mind is a violation even worse than imperious.
It is a torture that will last far longer than the crucio.
Wizards obliviate non wizards and think nothing of it, they do it to each other too!

No in the books the Wizarding World is a faithless thing.

The HAT belongs in Ravenclaw.
Or rather the composer of the song does.