*wide-eyed* This is what you call a mere 'character study?' I am going to check if you have any multi-chapter FFVII now...
The last line... so poignant.

Oh wow, I giggled my way through the whole thing and then shivered when I read the last line.

Awesome work; you turned the story around so quickly I nearly tripped. ;P

I don't know if you meant it to be, but reading this gave me chills. Especially the last line. Great piece.

Awesome one-shot...Your Sephiroth and Zack are spot on I have to say..Love how you write it with a sense of normal in it. Some people while writing Sephiroth totoally just blow his character out of porportion.

Anyway, love the chapter...it was hilarious. That last sentence had saying,' Crap, he's gonna snap everybody head for the hills!' lol

last line was priceless.

wow i wish my room was neat, and tidy. xD

Cute.

Ehehe...right at the end there. Total foreshadowing. But I found this rather amusing. Poor Seph. Guess he has a case of OCD. Great job, I liked it!

Bu-Dum CHING!

A silly little story- the punchline at the end there caught me off guard and made me laugh, but I don't think you meant for it too.

Aww! It was so... cute. And I think Seph also finds the usual cleaning soothing - order out of chaos kind of thing. Spills and accidents are stressors though... *stops rambling* Right, a good lovely character study.

lol its good that Seph has controll or Zack would be dead by now hahaha

Wow. That was crazy foreshadowing going on. Crazy...Try destroying the world insane, Sephy! Great job!

Wonderful, wonderful character study. Everything, from the first line to the last, is all Sephiroth's character.

Obsessive, controlling, organized, flawless...so very true. Perfection can't be attained by humans-if one did, he would be liable to go insane because perfection is...unthinkable.

Again, a great fic.

~Calenlass