Heh. The rape implications in the first chapter were a little over-the-top, but given that Evayle pretty much suggests they let Rifis get *lynched* in the game, all in all I found the various forms of "punishment" pretty suitable. I always did think Evayle/Briggid would be a kind of kinky lady! It was very nice to see a story about the Fiana Militia even if everyone involved was being some degree of bad. Or naughty, anyway.

Haha! A humorous story that isn't off-the-wall! I've always wanted to see Evayle's... maternal instincts XD. She's one of my favorite characters, and really hate Rifis so this was perfect!

OMG Rifis is so...ugh that was so not cool. Poor Ronan. GREAT CHAPTER! Hope you update soon!

Oh Ronan! This was especially painful to read, poor guy... ;_;

I find myself reading this more than once... XD

Oh, poor Rifis... I actually struggled reading when he was getting beat, ah I'm such a dork. XD

Wow I love this story a lot n_n! Poor Ronan ;_; I must know what happens next, so please update soon! I wonder if Rifis will get found out...-squeals with anticipation- Fabulous story x3

Kool story! - Nice beginning.

Not good, wat is Rifis thinking of doing to Ronan?

Please update as soon as you can.