I think Luke's a bit ooc for this chapter, but whatever I suppose getting turned into a werewolf can raelly affect u.

Well anyway update soon, though u still didn't explain what Luke was doing there alone, or is this the time where he's meeting up with his friends?

but that can't be, i mean Van should still be in the core.

I can't wait for the next chapeter, this polt's keeping me on edge :) I wonder what the other character say when they find out (if they do taht is)

That's a pretty nice story. Can't wait for the next chapter to come out!

Hm this is really getting good. I wonder how the others will react. I dont think Kelly is bad, her father seems evil though. Cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon!

-Canis

Hey, this story is fairly well-written. Good job! I can't wait!

Sweet Chapter I must say! I would totally think Asch would call Luke freak, poor Luke he didn't even deserve this. Tsk. Ohh, and this Kelly, maybe she's one of the good guys perhaps? Is her father the evil one, or is Raphael? Update ;).

Oh!Interesting indeed, good chapter! i really can't wait to see how luke reacts! :)!

Ohh! I wonder what's the orange liquid gonna do to Luke? In the later chapters will Luke show signs of any symptoms? Raphael... interesting name, I wonder why they call him that. Please update soon, it's very interesting and developing well! :)!

Very nice, you're writing is exciting, and I can easily imagine the story being played out. I'll be waiting for the next chapter,

good job!

Oh, interesting. Continue, plz! Looks like a werewolf story thingamajig. Except well-written. XD (Sorry, I'm usually skeptical to this sort of thing). Anywho, nice beginning! Looking forward to another update!

Oh, sound very interesting. please continue :).