Perfect. Just perfect all around.

This was very enjoyable to read! There were so many of Yuffie's lines that had me laughing and smile over her silliness. Yet you also showed the other side of her is tough, firm and encouraging when it came to bringing Vincent out of his self-pity mode. You totally nailed her character to a T. And since this is VY, I couldn't ask for more perfect ending :)

Hehe, very cute! I like how you've written them both. The metaphors were great as well!

Beautiful! Loved it. 3

Great job. You're awesome :D

Ohmuhgah, this was so freaking precious. You've got Yuffie's voice down pat, you know that? I LOVE it. And I especially love how there wasn't a ton of mush, 'cause there really can't be, with these two.

Just Yuffie griping about Vincent being emo-on-a-stick [which is a _very_ Yuffie thing to say, btw]. Very nice! 3

Listen here, Vinnie: I am now your girlfriend and I demand we hold hands, or Sephiroth will come back again and kill us all.

Haha! I love that line!

omg! at first i thought it said "emo with a stick" HAHA!

Can I just say that there were so many lines in this story that made me burst out in laughter? I would list them, but they would take up half of this lovely review!

They were completely in character, and I've written stories with Yuffie before but their never as in-character as I want them to be, unfortunately. And Yuffie was totally kickass too! She scolded Vincent! THE Vincent Valentine! And he took it! WOW!

Anyway, I'm going to stop squealing over your story now :D

~astrya02

You certainly got Yuffie's thought processes down nicely XD Anyway, this was a lot of fun to read! I liked how you showed Vincent's natural self while still keeping it humorous. Good job!

Sephiroth will kill us all? Funny line. Favorite couple in FF7 is yuffie and vincent. Second is Tifa and Cloud and then Aerith and zack. But if he doesnt hold hands with her they die? lol

* XD the best part of this story:

"There was an explosion of warm. It was like the cold was fleeing out of me and running on its scared little legs back to the gale outside that was raging like a grumpy Sephiroth on his period. That's how badass his cape was. Tremble in fear."

* Loved it, really. Your fic is only the second one that made me like the yuffie/vincent pairing ;p (the other one being 'A long, hard road' by Twig )

" “You need to listen to me. I—I'm too old—”

“You make up for that by having the emotional maturity of a ten year-old,” I snorted. He blinked at me, as if seriously debating whether or not to urge on the ensuing battle of insults, and wisely decided he didn't want to lose.

“And I'm too dangerous,” he continued, as if I hadn't said a word. “I'm not even safe for you, for anyone. What if Galian, or one of the others, breaks out and tries to hurt you?”

“Vincent, I'm a freaking ninja. I kill stuff, it's what I do. I can handle myself just fine, evident of the ass I kick every day. Besides, Galian is just an overgrown puppy with really big teeth and bad breath.” I waved my hand dismissively."

* Go Yuffie! _ (and I loved the comment about the Galian Beast XDD)

and your little comparisons ('the cold hit me like a yeti' and 'the banshee storm outside had stopped pounding and fuming like a pregnant lady') are made of win ;p

By the way, you wouldn't believe how I got here: I was browsing the Genesis Awards Forum and found the Reviews Quote topic. And you posted about a review for this fic. I read the first few lines of the review and decided to read the fic before finishing the review, 'coz it looked great. And it was. Really :)

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Only two words can describe this fic.

AW!

Oh wait, that was only one...XD Ops. But either way, this fic was friggin' awesome and your writing was fantastic. You should make another, so then I could review. ;D

God Bless!

Okay, that was seriously awesome. I love Yuffentines, and this one was such a fun read! You totally captured them both (good job!) Great story!

Aww.

I really like this fic! The humor is awesome!

A.W.E.S.O.M.E.

nothing else i can say. :P