This entire thing could fit the label "sickeningly sweet", I think this is the fluffiest, most surprisingly mundane thing I've read featuring these two and I LOVE it!

D'aww Spocky 3 summed my reaction while reading this piece. You're supposed to have brain capacity far larger than human and you don't know you were smitten? nobody could resist Jim's charm for long :D

Keep thinkin about it, Spock. Think hard.

hehe spock liked carrying jim!

AWWWWWWW

Wish there was more but this in itself is wonderful so thanks! :D

Aza
xx

I love the story but I think it needs one more chapter where Kirk wakes up and everything is explained.

Aw Spocky you are Jim's favorite!

"Yer my fav'rit" I CAN totally see him saying that sentence. It fits perfect. I don't know why, maybe because of the accent, but it's one of the most adorable sentence I've never read in his mouth. KIRKITTY.
The only one who can jeopardize Spock's perfect logic. He's such a stubborn Vulcan boy, I love him.
Arf, you and Kirk have made my day, I can go to sleep in peace haha.
Thank youu :D

I'm about to read your loooong fic which seems absolutely fantastic. As a French girl trying to improve her English, your fic will be my teacher for a few days (yeah you have to feel honored and grateful, haha. I also planned to read Grape of Wrath, such a program, isn't it ?). Since I enjoy writing reviews, don't be afraid if I give you one per chapter. Yet I think my limited English will help me to contain my stream of words (it may be a weird expression... stream of words, like stream of consciousness, most of my review are akin to that thing)
See you soon, though !

Heehee. I love you. And your stories.

Please come back!

So sweet. Just love it.

I loved this!

Awesome! Please continue. As soon as possible. grin

Beth

Very good and funny for such a short story.

great fic!

short sweet and to the point. good work