Reviews for Insecurities and Inexperience |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it and it made me laugh but the ending didn't fit would of been better if u carry it on abit more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god. I discovered this little story yesterday and I have been laughing my head off but this is the creme de la creme. I swear I peed myself with this chapter. It is so great to get someone who can have you laughing so much you have tears coming down your face and the need for a large pack of tena lady. I have you in my favourites and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your stuff. Now that I've composed myself, to a point, I'm off to the next chapter Laura |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you going to do a sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() What did Emmet say? Btw, lovely story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() *cheers* I haven't laughed this much in a long time! truley enjoyed this little gem! Thanks for the laughs, x TGB |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god I really really wish i hadnt been drinking while reading this one! psfl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah I cant imagine how embarrassing it would be to have any of those discussions with your father - eek! Bugger that x |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very funny, i really enjoyed chapter one, and can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. xx TGB |
![]() ![]() ![]() great ending ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahahaha! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wut did emmett say? |
![]() ![]() ![]() did not see the end coming |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was an awesmoely fuuny story PLEASE PLEASE do a sequel there's so much more to be said :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a way to leave the story! I mean that is truly something that leads everything open, but it seriously made me laugh! It was to be expected really though, that Charlie would turn up eventually, although it's rather shocking in the way it happened. I liked the story and the whole concept, it was entertaining to read, although I feel like the four never gained justice for what they said to Bella and Edward and the way they publicly continued to humiliate Bella and made her the laughing stock of the whole group as that was truly unfair! I thought the story was a nice bit of entertainment to cheer up a boring afternoon and was filled with fun and sexy, smut which was hot and entertaining to read! Well, I will indeed look out for a possible sequel as this truly had a cliffy ending, not that I didn't love it! Very enjoyable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol I like it |