love it

favorite part: "arthritic fingers scratching at the sky"... beautiful imagery... but don't get too carried away with the metaphors during the conversation... it can get distracting

pretty good, kind of pointless though. all in all good fic. keep the faith- redlion

This does explain what Hermoine was doing out there. I think everyone wonders if they're attractive from time to time, and the fact that Harry likes her anyway is so sweet.

I really liked this story! It was even better than the "Guessing Game"!

Wow! That was awesome! I love it! I want more! ~Katie

cool! poor hermione, those stupid model people!

A great story! Continue writing!

That was also good! And it made the other fic "Guessing Game" better, and more descript. You are SO going on my favorite authors list.

Oh I like! You are an awsome writer! I like this story! Now i'm going to read your long one! But I'll probably read that tomorrow cuz it's almost midnight!

ah, the thing that plagues too many of our female race *bless our souls*, the "I'm too fat. Why can't I have a perfect body?"

This was good. I must put in here that I simply loathe the thought of being anorexic and junk like that. Besides, it is always better to have someone you love like you for who you are, not for your body, like Hermione says in there,er, thought.

great job.

~Flamegaruru~

perfect! your fics rule all of them are good, pretty good for a 14 year old girl

keep on writing!

aaaaaaaaawwwwww how sweet! i like it! great job! h/hr 4ever! :):):)

The whole magazine stuffs so TRUE (T_T)...

Thinking about it.. I never thought about being someone on a magazine... Anyways, Nice story!

Oh God! *sobs heavily* You are such a Goddess! this story was amazing, and so true! I wish I had a Harry...