story reads more like important plot points to writer than an actual story I mean world cup start of attack after the cup straight to the Express really jumps through story and leaves the fun stuff off screen

Yea trashy romance, Neville blonde? Harry just acts like a playboy I don’t like when writers make him act like Sirius and James when it comes to flirting with anything with a pair of tits Harry is his own person.. It’s not attractive and you drag out the romance between him and daphne and make pointless drama.

Great story. A bit hilarious. I loved it. Harry was a bit too pervy for a 14yr old but im glad he got better after getting together with Daphne.

What a splendid story. Thank you for bringing it to us.

Really good story. Most fics don't make me laugh out loud but your dialogue did. The insults were probably too old for the ages of these kids but I can ignore that.

My one criticism that I have is that cus isn't a really word and I got stuck in it everytime I came across it.

Other than that damn good show sir!

What the actual f*ck. I've been reading this for fun but this is seriously too much. The passion is right there, they are both falling for each other. AND YET YOU PULLED THIS ON US. You sir are cruel because all we want to see is them finally admitting their feeling to each other.

The whole zoe thing... just ugh. Also, normally it's two people who wont talk to each other because they're both scared.. but he literally asked, daphne _ stupid. Just want them to find each other already.

I'm honestly a little disappointed. They were right there.. dangit.

Heh, scarlet witch in a red spandex-like suit? ;p

Man, this was awesome.

Absolutely loved the dialogue, the teasing and generally being total arses to each other. Some bug must have flown into my eye during that last scene with James and the one with the Marauders over Harry's bed.

Keep up the good work. I'll just go on and check out the sequel.

This is not a Harry/Daphne story? All of the talk about being into blondes, her being his "wife" and all are just gags? Meh.

Forgive me if I find this too dramatic and OOC. The sequence in the graveyard, specifically. Even canon Harry wasn’t as theatrical as yours.
I mean, I get why Harry is the way he is, what being raised by the Marauders but his mood swings are so extreme in this!
Good story, theatrical characters galore.
LoA.

So is this a harem/"liberal" f bullshit kind of story? You should have put that in the description tbh, not everyone shares that kind of believe and can be kind of a mood killer

Excellent story! Love the idea of Harry having one of his parents and the rest of the (good) Marauders available to him. Love all of the detail in the story. Also love his pairing with Daphne and the humorous way he finally figured out how much she meant to him. Great job! I'm going to go check out the sequel now...

Great job