I like it already!

Issa

Oh wow! That was a good chapter. I love the costumes that Alice and Rosalie bought, hehe!

Hope you update soon :):)

what was there that was so disturbing? UPDATE SON! plz?

I read it!

in what year is the story? (or at least, how old is Renesmee?) is Amaury mute? and who are the Heiress? and why was Ivory there? I can't beleive you put the river flows in you! OME! they must have a good taste over there... but where is there...? LOVE the story! if your brain hurts, you could write only bits at the time (but make sure you don't procrastinate, I am already a victim af it...)

I just can't resist correcting your mistakes in French, even if I know it's your first year of it... (you wrote that on your profile, I didn't stalk! xD)

you wrote "beau", which actually means good-looking (for a guy). The right word (or words), in the context, would be "ma belle"

you also wrote "tu t'appelle comment" (which is not a very big mistake, I sometimes do the same mistake) it means 'what's your name' but as if you were talking to a friend, not an adult you don't know... it's good manners to say:"Comment vous appellez-vous?"

and I the last one would be "Nous commencent" cemmencent is the good verb tense and the good verb too, but not at the good person. it should be "nous commençons" or "commençons-nous?" which is at the 2nd person plural.

apart from that, your French is really good! especially for a beginner. Last year, students in my class would do the same mistakes, xD. If ever you want me to correct your mistakes in French, I would be very glad to help!

UPDATE SOON! LUV the story!

Wow loved it! I can't believe you wrote that while you had an headache, it was amazing. I would have never had the concentration to do that whilst I din't feel well.

I hope you feel better soon and that you update as soon as you are feeling better :):)

how are you going to name the new Cullen member? BTW, if you want, you could make the chapters a little bit longer and elaborate on the story, because right now, we are still in the initial situation... maybe you could get more readers... anyways, UPDATE SOON!

NO! don't quit! I'm really sorry I actually didn't review the story when I put it on alert, but I really didn't have time. I really think this story is amazing and you should really continue. But in the last chapter, you said she woke up in a bed, but I don't get how she did. Maybe one day, she would fall off her tree and break a leg or something in front of the new Cullen vampire (by the way, is he mute or something?) UPDATE SOON!

Anna you pirnted the same story twice

But good

The flashbacks you a good way of knowiing the person's histoy

I like your ideas however, I think you made a mistake with your update the last chapter repeats. Good luck with it.

Age: try nineteen

Names: Alexander (ALex)

Shelly or Natally I don't know they sound like good names but that is just off the top of my head.

very mice I like the name it's an unuasl name for an unknown charater

You're almost there Anna.

Keep up the good work.

nice Anna. little bit on the down side...but its good :)

aww, how cute of her! to forgive her attacker. if you really want to attract readers, make it a little it's no fun to read something a paragraph long.(though your was longer than that, it's just an example )