This is a wonderfully written fic. It's a rare treat to see fic on the BOOK version of THOND! Well done! You presented Claude Frollo quite well.

This was très magnifique. Beautifully written, while wonderfully sensual and alluring. I've seen many writers struggle with writing in first person, but you did a very nice job. I loved how the story was clearly influenced by the musical; (shameless obsessive NDdP fangirl speaking) it's rare to find those in this fandom that have *actually* either read the book or seen the musical. Stunning job m'dear.

GUH. Daniel Lavoie is amazing.

Wow, I read the summary and my eyebrows went up.

I didn't really read this, because Frollo absolutely disgusts me, and I am seriously glad that I can't read his mind, but may I just say that there is a good reason that Esmerelda reviles Frollo?

Way to use some vocab! : )

I love, love, love, love, LOVE it!

*falls down on knees and grovels to your superior FrolloxEsmeralda interaction knowledge and skill*

Ah, poor Claude. No matter what happens, he can't have the one thing he desires more than anything else.

Don't you hate how Disney made him out to be the bad guy?

GOOD LORD.

This was absolutely beautiful.

A beautiful, very lyrical evocation.

Poor boy… He's got it so very bad!

Your style of writing in this piece is so effortlessly beautiful. Even though the prose is eloquent you can fully sense Frollo's desperation and want; he is a man on the edge and then he's drowning. You captured that so perfectly.

Definitely a new favorite. ;)

~NI

aka scarlite

LOL

(Be careful about those lyrics you have. I know they are anti songfic. I don't know if it counts, but hey, better safe than sorry?)

Awesome.

Loved the description in this espicially, at the start, of Esmeralda's dancing. Really excellent and unique choice of words throughout.

Scorpicus

Hey, it's me from LJ )

Wait, WAIT *reads again* Yup, it's still brilliant _

Keep up the great work!