I hope you continue one day I have so many questions hope you PM me so I can ask them

Great job

just to let the author know this fic sucks as it had a potential if handled well the author had done a little bit research on naruto...but it is sloppily handled and how the author portrayed naruto here just doesn't fit at all making ...at first I thought it looked interesting now not so much also whats the point of having having naruto if your just make him as a side character him doing nothing just contradict his character, messy plot,boring filler like chapters , wimpiest naruto I've seen, also I'm going through all chapters the second time and it just doesn't make sense that Evangeline girl can even use chakra (as stated by other people ),lame plot development, (it just stupid) everyone easily taking it for granted that naruto is a millennium of years old even older than their world, (also others don't bother to say don't like don't read ...I'm just my opinion about this fic nothing more nothing less)

cool

Pffffft, that was a ridiculous game. xD Ridiculous, but funny. :P

hah ive been following this fic from that negima and naruto ended it would be really cool if you finish this fic.i really like this i know real life matters the most.i just finished reading this from start to end someone can adopt this fic

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I can't read anymore. What's the point of having naruto I. The story if the story stays the same way. Naruto made no difference what so ever. He's a side character.l, meaning he makes no difference at all to the story

It's Boeing you keeping.g everything Cannon and naruto ain't try doing anything

havnt read this chapter yet but marking it so i dont loose it

Huh, if I recall correctly Evangeline is bound to the tree. Since the tree is only special here because it's soaked in Naruto's metaphysical juices, would she be able to leave if it was with him?

I was going to wait till I finished reading the story so far, but I must say this chapter was absolutely brilliant, funny well written, and a little bit hotter than I would have expected, I love how you took the time to do a scenario with each and every girl.

I didn't like that Eva can use chakara. It goes against the setting that you created. You stated in an earlier chapter that none of the modern day humans were capable of using chakara. As old as Evangeline is she is still too young to have been born during the era of chakara.

I liked everything except the fact that Naruto looks down so much on Negi trying to get a kiss. He should understand that Negi was under the influence of the world tree to get a kiss. Didn't like that Negi didn't get a kiss in this chapter. Especially since Naruto tricked his way in kissing 31 girls yet he won't let Negi complete a single kiss.

this is the 3rd time ive read this and have been reading it since it was first published i know you have a life but can u at least bring out the next chapter or find a good author on the site to adopt and continue this story plz n thank you... unless ur dead then damn this will never be completed so if ur alive do let us know