I'm sorry and I don't know how to say this but...

This is kinda rude...

Update your fricking story already ;-;

Hello, I just wanted to tell you that I think this is one of the BEST twilight story that I have ever read. Thank you for writing it.
Take care,
Tammgrogan

always always the stupid Bella, selfish, weak and silly girl with inferiority complex.

too bad if you abandoned it, first chapter and I already like it.

I'm certain this is abandoned. But it was beautiful and I am glad I found it, and maybe someday you'll come across it and finish.

I have really enjoyed what you have written!

Some one adopt it the writer abandon it its too perfect tooo be leaved :(((((((( this is my second fav of all jacob bella fanfics that i ever read first is bella,s guittar by amanda forks
This stories jake is soooooooooooo sweeeeet and real thaty its crime to leave him alone the plot is great there should be a message for bella to find out its uniqe this bella is more intresting than the original one ahhhh its really sad this story didnt have a chance to be finished

So Bella fucks jakje over again. Which shows that that bellas selfishness and creepy, sick outlook was firmly entrenched before any sparklespires came along. whgat a pathetic looser. No version of Bella is sympathetic or someone you can rally wish good things for. she is only capable of hurting and taking. she gives nothing.

Falling in "love" with a pale creepy reanimated corpse. An abusive lieing manipulative mass murderer. Way to go Bella. So what have we here? Another Bella gets to use Jake as her personal doormat kind of tale?

You know, you left it on a note that it could be finished. It could be.
I'd like to see more of Jake and Bells, but who wouldn't.
I'm not frustrated with this conclusion.
But I would like to see more. Or, to see you click the "Complete" button.

Thank you for your ideas. It was clever.

Okay, it's been over 5 years and I'm about to get to the last chapter. I know it's not done because my led me here and she says it isn't.
Get on the ball. Law school is over. You should have passed the bar by now. First few years in them firm should be over.
Finish this story, please.

Oh god. How does she know the name Claire Young. I can't wait to see Bella's reaction to the familiar name. This story has me thoroughly addicted.

Bella sharing her alternative universe with real life Jake was great and some what cathartic for the character. I can't wait untill Bella get to see Edward in the real world.

She's alone. Jake finally had enough of her crazy. One would think that after the events of the day... Now would be a good time to seek professional help. But no, we all know she won't. But where's the fun in that! Great chapter.

Who is the woman in the brown dress? A hallucination I assume. How exciting.