Reviews for Two Hawks Hunting
Guest chapter 36 . 7/20
I would absolutely love a third instalment of this amazing series! Severus and Harry need some bonding time :)
talented2 chapter 1 . 6/20
I once tried to read this fic a few month after the first part. And I was completely lost.
Now I am reading the two in direct succession and it makes far more sense.
I think it would help if you would drop a few hints about what happened before. A bit like in the HP books: Every single one mentions in the first few chapters 'This is Harry Potter, he looks ..., he is a wizard and his parents were murdered by Voldemort'. It might seem useless especially if you read it for the umpteenth time. But it is helpful when you haven't read a series in a while.
catlord1 chapter 63 . 3/18
I loved both stories so well done I couldn't put it down is there a sequel
Remstar1212 chapter 14 . 1/4
What's funny is I really want snape to have a bf
she is brighter chapter 29 . 10/15/2019
I love this story. I do wish to learn more about this ceremony though
Starless chapter 63 . 9/6/2019
Enjoyed this fic a lot! I don't read genfic that much but you're one of my favourite HP authors for genfic :) Thanks for the amazing story, your OCs are really well fleshed out (like the wolfen) and the plot to find the Horcruxes is better than canon imo.
brightflare chapter 63 . 9/2/2019
Great story and series! Hope you continue it sometime!
Tatum Grimes chapter 63 . 8/10/2019
this is amazing i want to read the next years adventures.
kajarian9 chapter 63 . 7/14/2019
It is a really great fanfic! I Think this is better than the original plot. I used Google Translate to read it, but it's still awesome! I hope you write a Sequel.
Sleepy Niffler chapter 63 . 1/10/2019
Reread this story and it's amazing. Would love to know if you did a sequel when Harry and Severus were back at Hogwarts.
June Phillips chapter 53 . 12/13/2018
Kudos to you for dealing so mental health issues and solutions. I love the HP series, but I had always wished for school counselors and therapists for all the adults who carried so much baggage. I also enjoy the maturation in Sirius and the healing in the relationship between Severus and the Marauders.
June Phillips chapter 45 . 12/7/2018
As an adoptive mother, I so loved the magical adoption ritual. I think Sev is a good choice for headmaster, he is better suited to a more challenging position than teaching the younger kids, although I don't think he needs the headache. I have one question for you, I can't figure out the timing of things. How did Harry and Sev complete the horcrux hunt before Harry's birthday? It felt like much more than a month to me, between their time in Romania and the Witherspoons. If you feel like you have time to answer, I am at . Thanks.
June Phillips chapter 43 . 12/6/2018
Albus's confessions brought tears to my eyes and Harry and his pajamas had me rolling with laughter.
June Phillips chapter 42 . 12/6/2018
Loved the journey to save Harry. You come up with some interesting ideas. Not sure if you still look at your reviews. Great job!
June Phillips chapter 36 . 11/27/2018
I'm sorry that you were experiencing writer's block. As I am reading this fanfic many years later with 63 chapters, I liked Harry's struggle with killing the werewolf. It reminds me of another fanfic Sev quoted the Talmud to Harry. It said that if someone comes to kill you, get up early and kill him first. Harry's act is sad, but justified. I am looking forward to seeing how you answered each of your questions.
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