Teenagers annoy the living shit out of me
they couldn't care less who is watching
so clutch at your pearls and start shouting
"Oh for Merlin's sake! Get a room!"

wow

I'm gonna be honest. After reading your anorexia story, I really wasn't holding out much hope for this. But the premise of this story is so much better. In volume 1, you mentioned it was your first HPTwilight, and I think you did really well. So even though the other was pretty uncomfortable to read, this story gives me hope that there are other gems in your library, and I'll just need to keep reading to find them.

All was Edward's fault! if he claim his mate earlier, non of this would happen.. Harry is too innocent and didn't know he was being manipulated... and he dare called Harry whore?! I just want to smack his head down the table!

I really want to ask a question here but it will probable spoil someone elses reading pleasure. O well it will probably be explained in volume three.

My heart burned when Edward saw Alice's Vision . I tried nkt to scream and cry of lain, and sadness :'( . And it's 11:03 PM ...THE FEELS ARE SOOO STROOONG!

Nooooo that was too cruel having him r-raped *cries*

I wonder why no one said that it was Edward's fault - not even Edward himself. Because he definitely has half of the blame...

T.T *pout* harry, you should have made him grovel a bit more.

EDWARD, how could you! *sob* this is all getting so out of hand...

Thanks for sharing.

wow Brilliant !

wonderful.

:) i love it...ooo children? *snerk* i look forward to more!

:) i love it...ooo children? *snerk* i look forward to more!