Reviews for The Return of Bad Jacob |
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![]() ![]() THIS IS SUCH A GOOD SERIES I NEED THE END ASAP OTHERWISE I WILL DIE! |
![]() ![]() I need the epilogue SO BAAAAAD |
![]() ![]() Hmm |
![]() ![]() I dont want her choose Edward |
![]() ![]() You Kept them in character AMAZING |
![]() ![]() ![]() So curious about the epilogue! Also what’s with some of these incredibly harsh reviews? I enjoyed this story. Your take on the characters and their relationships was interesting. Gotta hope she picks Jake though. |
![]() ![]() Please write the epilogue soon! I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where's the epilogue to this story? |
![]() ![]() This story is so good holy shit! And you stayed true to the characters, their personalities at least. Some things obviously had to be changed to fit the plot but your dialogue is so entertaining and in character. Im gonna be sad when i get to the last chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wish u added more to does she choose. |
![]() ![]() So what Bella stays with Edward because well somethings better than nothing in your world. Bella wx only hedging her bets anyway. Instead of doing whats right if she chose Jake and sending the rotting sack of meat packing she intended to let edward stay around so she could change her mind. That would be jakes miserable pathetic life with that cunt. Waiting for the other shoe to drop. Bella needs to die... your pretty good at creepy sick shit. Not sad really just cringe worthy. |
![]() ![]() Wh cant someone kill Bella. That would work for everybody. Bella is one the most unlikable characters in fiction. She has not one redeeming quality |
![]() ![]() Continuity errors? What an ugly pointless..fic. Is there anyone that can make Bella act like a human being? Now bella is a souless slut. Always a coward, always using Jake. Always a piece of shit. How about letting jake be like he was in the books instead of this weak pathetic male version of bella. Nobody seems to make bella be anything but a worthless piece of shit. And wht the fuck does that mean He HAS to be her friend? Thats bullshit. Another marysue headtrip. |
![]() ![]() Thats Bella - ALL her way. Selfish, self-centered and sick. She would rather be with an abusive deceitful, manipulative freak of a rotting corpse |
![]() ![]() ![]() bella the whore |