Who ever those grls are pls tell them to try and write their own story and talk to me .I am a reviewer for competitions of fanfictions .we will see who has better written work because if they don't read the whole story .of course they won't understand the dam story .*to those grls . shut ur god awful traps about good books and stories when u can't even write your own

To who ever wrote this .I love ur work .u are talented and I want to write like u one literally crying right now

Fuck you!
Why don’t you do lemons

LOVE THIS STORY!

Don't listen to the haters, they probably live in their parents basement and have nothing better to do. You are talented and I enjoyed reading this, I love Jasper

Hey I know I'm late to the party but dammmmmmmm that ending got me... I knew it when it said from unknown pov and I was hoping it was right but even though I expected it im still here weeping like a baby... lol great job... well written. 3

Damn. Really? I'll be pissed too of someone accuse me of being a lesbian and I'm bi. All I got to say stop, you have no control of the writer. If you don't like it, don't read. I loved the story. Yea there were some mistakes, but I just power right through them and correct it in my head. I don't want to make the writer mad.

I really liked the idea of this story and how it started but it seems to drag on slightly. I really do love the Volturi portrayals in this story and hope the ending is good but I have to stop reading this. Just by reading what I have so far I can tell that a younger writer wrote it. I hope you keep writing because I could see how your writing improved over the chapters with the more you wrote.

I couldn't stop reading this thank u so much for sharing!

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I love this story

This story is a little dragged out.

Is Jazz mistaking the agony that Bella feels as someone else's?

Best story ever

Awesome story! Thank you for sharing.